I Wonder

I wonder why on winter night so cold as darkness looms and daylight takes her bow that I am feeling loneliness take hold. I wonder what it is she’s doing now; perhaps she’s letting poetry console emotions that her life does not allow. I wonder why I feel I’ve lost control and wishing that forever I could flee these torrid storms that start to fill my soul. I wonder if she ever thinks of me and wishes we could make a brand new start; or if, from love, she’s happy to be free. My storms are raging since we’ve been apart; I wonder if it’s raining in her heart. January 12, 2020

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Emilia James

Date: 9/28/2021 1:33:00 PM

Love your poems John, they are always a joy to read even the sad ones. Hugs, Emilia : )

John Gondolf
Date: 9/28/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, Emilia, I always try to put a lot of emotion into my writing so the reader can feel it. You seem to always feel my words. I have always liked this poem, it has a special meaning to me, and the unwritten ending was happy. Hugs, John

Alison Hodges

Date: 2/11/2020 5:08:00 PM

I really like this poem! I feel like I've been there a dozen times and your words give life to the feelings.

John Gondolf
Date: 2/11/2020 6:03:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poetry, Allison, I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you have been there a dozen times I would say you have been unlucky in love. John

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/31/2020 3:11:00 PM

Beautiful...

John Gondolf
Date: 1/31/2020 9:37:00 PM

Thanks, Keith.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2020 5:38:00 AM

Your heartfelt sadness comes through so sweetly here.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/30/2020 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren, I appreciate it. John

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2020 2:09:00 PM

This is a beautiful and emotional poem in Terza Rima form, John. Well done! Regards // paul

John Gondolf
Date: 1/22/2020 6:07:00 AM

Thanks, Paul, I appreciate it. John

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2020 7:01:00 AM

You did this form very well..A poem that many will be able to relate too.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

John Gondolf
Date: 1/19/2020 9:12:00 PM

Thanks, SO, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting the contest. John

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/16/2020 11:19:00 AM

i think all of us have been there at one point in our lives... wonderfully penned John, the reader can feel this one... hugs

John Gondolf
Date: 1/16/2020 12:30:00 PM

Thank you, Sandy, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2020 3:34:00 AM

A sad exceptionally beautiful and penned with a heartfelt desire. Blessings John, Jennifer.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/15/2020 4:29:00 AM

Thank you, Jenn, I appreciate it. Hope all is well with you and yours. Hugs, John

Margarita Lillico

Date: 1/14/2020 2:57:00 PM

Great one John, learning from you if you may:) I wonder whether one may flee From torrid, raging fantasy?

John Gondolf
Date: 1/14/2020 3:02:00 PM

I'm humbled that you think you can learn from me, Margarita, I'm just a simple man who writes simple poetry. I would never even try to flee from a raging fantasy, I would relish it. Hugs, John

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/13/2020 4:05:00 PM

It may very well be, John; it is just so difficult for many of us to come out from under the clouds--especially those we have ourselves created. Great, sensitive write!

John Gondolf
Date: 1/13/2020 5:17:00 PM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Joe, I appreciate it.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/12/2020 6:36:00 PM

The heart will always linger. It is normal to Wonder about someone you care for, hoping they care enough to linger in thoughts as well. This is beautiful, tender and sad at the same time. She is thinking of you. Of that I am sure. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 8:18:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments, Brandy, and for always being you. Hugs, John

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2020 1:22:00 PM

Hello John,congratulations on your HM. I suppose you will always wonder if she thinks of you. Unless she tells you. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2020 2:34:00 PM

Hello John Gondoff,you are so welcomed. Hugs Darlene

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 1:24:00 PM

Thank you so much for your thoughts and visit, Darlene. Hugs, John

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/12/2020 1:10:00 PM

John congratulations on your HM!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2020 1:35:00 PM

They are all winners to me my friend!;)

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 1:18:00 PM

Thanks, Bren, I seem to be stuck on HM in Brian's contests, I need to step up my game. hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2020 1:07:00 PM

Just love the blend of nature with the emotions of the heart. So well-crafted, John! Warmest wishes, Gershon

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 1:17:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate it.

Lin Lane

Date: 1/12/2020 9:50:00 AM

I've felt the depth of such pain, John, for I've fallen prey to those same despondent thoughts. I wrote a similar poem some time ago. Your last couplet is amazing.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2020 4:24:00 AM

No, you didn't, John. They come unbidden when I least expect them. Thank you for your concern. Hugs back to you.

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 11:12:00 AM

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, Lin, I hope I didn't dredge up any ancient unwanted memories. All the best. Hugs, John

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2020 9:41:00 AM

A break up is painful, you never forget and memories remain and you can't help but wonder how your partner is feeling. Well written John. Tom

John Gondolf
Date: 1/12/2020 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughts and comments, Tom, I appreciate it. John