I Wish You Would

I wish you would see God’s pardon that’s free offered with love’s glee grace, hope, peace, mercy of blest ecstasy… I pray that you would sense what’s true midst blurring hue to get real view… May your heart make great start not depart… From light faith’s might… Seek*!
Diminished hexaverse with rhyme form midst didactic aim. *Mtthew 6:33 But seek ye first the kingdom of God, and his righteousness; and all these things shall be added unto you. April 15, 2023 3rd place, "This or That, Vol 17" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 4/28/2023.
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Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful dim hex, Beata:-) I love that it rhymes, too. Very well done!
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April 28, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend................
Peck Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 8:44 AM
This is lovely, Beata.
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