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I Wish I Was

I wish that I was a firefly bright I'd blink and blink 'til the broad daylight To let you know that the time is right To seal our love on this very night And if you're pleased by this blinking sight I'll hang right here in suspended flight So my little arms can hold you tight To show this world a beautiful sight - Two bugs making love with all their might 5-3-18 For Viv Wigley's contest I Wish That I Was

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2018 11:41:00 AM

what a cute ending to your monorhyme:-) many congrats Larry:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/7/2018 12:10:00 PM

Congrats, Larry, and thanks for taking the time to enter. Regards, Viv

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/7/2018 11:34:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats, Larry. Well done.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/7/2018 8:27:00 AM

Hi Larry, I really enjoy the monorhyme form. Awe this is so beautiful and cute. Love shined bright is this write. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/7/2018 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement with this delightful monorhyme. I really enjoyed.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2018 12:37:00 AM

Adorable, Larry. I particularly enjoyed picturing "So my little arms can hold you tight"

Larry Bradfield
Date: 5/4/2018 8:52:00 AM

Haha..thanks, Line. Glad you enjoyed it !!