Larry Bradfield Poet Monorhyme

I Wish I Was

I wish that I was a firefly bright
I'd blink and blink 'til the broad daylight
To let you know that the time is right
To seal our love on this very night
And if you're pleased by this blinking sight
I'll hang right here in suspended flight
So my little arms can hold you tight
To show this world a beautiful sight -
Two bugs making love with all their might

5-3-18
For Viv Wigley's contest I Wish That I Was

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Jan Allison May 8, 2018 at 11:41 AM what a cute ending to your monorhyme:-) many congrats Larry:-) hugs jan xx

Viv Wigley May 7, 2018 at 12:10 PM Congrats, Larry, and thanks for taking the time to enter. Regards, Viv

Line Gauthier May 7, 2018 at 11:34 AM Back with well deserved congrats, Larry. Well done.

Alexis Y. May 7, 2018 at 8:27 AM Hi Larry, I really enjoy the monorhyme form. Awe this is so beautiful and cute. Love shined bright is this write. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Susan Gentry May 7, 2018 at 6:49 AM Congratulations on your placement with this delightful monorhyme. I really enjoyed.

Line Gauthier May 4, 2018 at 12:37 AM Adorable, Larry. I particularly enjoyed picturing "So my little arms can hold you tight" Larry Bradfield May 4, 2018 at 8:52 AM Haha..thanks, Line. Glad you enjoyed it !!