I Wish I May, I Wish I Might

No more dying babies
Food could be shared between
All humans and all would have full tummies

For all people, that is my world dream
All I want for my family and me
is good health and Love eternally 
through Jesus Christ


For Carol Brown's contest
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Villarosa Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 2:36 AM
A very concerned gestation you have here, Doris. I pray for your dreams to come true. Congratulations on winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 4:29 PM
Congrats on your winning poem and placement Doris in the Dreams Come True contest.. a most wonderful win and write .. enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Mckenzie Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 1:53 PM
Doris~ Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! I like your message! Laura :)
Fraser Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest Doris >> James
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations for your win Doris. This is truly a beautiful dream. A heavenly dream. I pray your dream comes true...I think it probably will. Smiles, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Doris in my contest. Love, Carol
Masciarelli Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Hi Doris this such a wonderful wish because there are so many people who are starving today right here in our own country and also in so many other places in the world but if we could all have a plan that we could put into action instead of just talking about it just think of all the lives that we could save by following through with action , Thank you for sharing this heart felt poem with all of us here in poetry soup because I thoroughly enjoyed my visit here with you today, God bless you :)
Hickman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 4:02 PM
May your wishes come true and all the best in the contest with this loving and spiritual write from your heart and mind,,and thank You for all the visits and words that you have left behind on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
Arteaga Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 1:40 PM
may your wishes come true, lovely poem to wish good fortune for yourself and others
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 12:12 AM
Doris, This is the best wish I can think of also. Sharing is love. Blessings, Connie
Knop Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 3:33 AM
Best wish, Doris! If not so much food would be waisted it would be enough to feed all. Thank you for your comments, Gert
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 9:42 PM
well, this is about the best wish anyone could ask for! Luv ya, Andrea
Cheeseman Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 11:04 AM
This is a great wish, sending you a rainbow, may your wish come true , thanks for your lovely wrds on my work Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:34 AM
Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Freeman Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:26 AM
A very good honorable wish in Free Verse form Doris. Thanks for dropping by and commenting. Agape, Moses
Byrne Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Well done good luck in the contest!
A  Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:00 PM
So far so good. Enjoyed reading...
Ahmad Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 3:04 PM
Nice on, good luck for your contest!
Owens Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 1:02 PM
I'm sorry your zipper broke...I just forgot to zip up that morning and luckily looked down during prayer and saw it...lol Needless to say I zipped up real quick!!! Marty
Johnson Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Great dream. Puts our petty ones to shame. Thanks for your comments on my stab at humor. Love, Joyce
Austin Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:55 AM
If you got a good family and good health, hey, you be gottin' it all! Remember. Money does not bring happiness. A man with 9 million is no happier than a man with 8 million. The food situation is deplorable, sickening, I agree. Love, daver
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 12:50 AM
Good thoughts for all of us. Thank you for your comment today. Larry and split a Bingo win tonight! Then we played for a while on the penny machines. I won enough to go for the big money tomorrow night. I was thinking and wishing/praying for at least $600 and that's exactly what I got! God does love Bingo :-) Ellen
Chircop Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 9:58 PM
May your wish come true dear Doris,that is my wish too..Charma
Owens Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 9:29 PM
Very wonderful wish...good luck in the contest...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:15 PM
BTW ..good luck in Carol's contest... a beauty so far ...luv..
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