I Willingly Give My Love and My Life For Them

my constant friend
i still
do not know
exactly what we
are doing here

but i feel death is
starting at my feet
and working up

so......

i must ask you to
tell my lover and 
my mother that 
i willingly give
my life so that
they may be free

tell them to look
at each spring
as a blessing and
talk about how i 
loved the spring.

and to you my 
dear friend,  if you 
make it out of here
i am going to
ask you to give a
extra kiss to those
you
love
then think of me

well the time is
here and i shut
my eyes....no i
do not hurt.  i see
my daddy and my
grandad at the gate
and i must run to
meet them.

i have made it here
and i am truly free.

by janetta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/3/2009 2:16:00 PM
Nice work and best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 4/10/2009 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Janetta. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:12:00 PM
Powerful and emotional free verse form. Well done, Janetta. Good luck in the final round. Lainie
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Date: 3/31/2009 6:23:00 AM
Congrats Janetta on both poems making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/15/2009 5:10:00 AM
This is an awesome and I hope as a new member of soup I am not late for more of all this powerful write.
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Date: 12/30/2008 5:57:00 PM
Its been too many months since you've posted such an outstanding write here at the Soup, Janetta. I do hope you return soon. This is a very heart-rending poem and has almost a ballad feell. Hope you had a nice holiday and that 2009 is a great year for you!
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Date: 11/10/2008 8:00:00 AM
Well Janetta, so glad you are still here. Congratulations on your amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/10/2008 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2008 5:05:00 PM
The short lines work well to convey your thoughts. Love the last stanza. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us. Karen
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations Janetta on being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Our time will come too soon so enjoy every freakin' moment. Vince
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Date: 8/30/2008 4:37:00 PM
We always wonder how it will be at the end, I like hearing your take on it.
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