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I Will Never Kiss Those Lips

Well there you are I have slithered into the wrong home tonight it seems I sniffed out the repugnant ward and I don’t like what I see You were magnificent in the face of all beholding you But your conceit is a trap that even I, the snake, have fallen into You mask yourself with humility You compliment me to gain Begging for the summer rain Begging for the words that would settle your brain You got it But instead it rained on me Showering me with dangling promises As typical as can be Empty These words so execrably wasted on you As if for a moment I could even dare CRAVE a poem for you I do not hate you I cannot love you At times I do not know what to feel Why do you do this? Put on a show and hope someone will notice? Do you want a nice pat on the back? I am armless; I am all but muscle and scales I am a dead carcass and yet you continue to compliment The beauty of my revulsion I hold it to my heart This trap you set I helped you set it right from the start And you have forced upon me the mere THOUGHT of you Taking away from my bitter lines What empty necessity I have turned out to be Some kind of trophy coiled around your feet Walking all over me I’ve hissed and I’ve hurled insult And the rain pitter-pattered my distain You rested knowing I would remain You needed reassurance You always needed GAIN Well I’ll tell you This serpent is drained And oh how I hiss I will not change into that typical mistress That settles your conscience with a kiss You will not have me I will never kiss those lips For you are as fake as can be And not even a snake like me Will help you in the deceiving As everyone watches your show The only one truly believing Is YOU Don’t hesitate out the door I’ll swallow you whole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 6:22:00 AM
Deceit isn't a good way to start a relationship for sure for it will only get worse..This one is filled with angry emtion..Very expressive..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:17:00 PM
I know I already comented on this one but cool write i sense a lot of longing in your writes to great emotion thanks for coments on mine mate if like stars there are two follow ups time and space to this in same pattern xxx davidscott
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Date: 7/29/2013 3:24:00 PM
I love the contemptuous attitude, the wisdom, the conflict in this literature Laura - such good nourishment - yum yum, yummy yum yum... much to learn from this composition my lovely friend - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:51:00 PM
Hehe Thanks Justin. (: ~Laura
Date: 7/28/2013 7:24:00 PM
And also it is nice to see that you have emerged from the darkness!
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Date: 7/28/2013 3:26:00 PM
Charming acrimony Laura - you present the great serpent as an adversary worth convincing of embracing alligence - sometimes what seems to be a fake is the whisper of truth's honor - 'Some kind of trophy coiled around your feet..' I enjoy'love/hare relationships - super maturity in this write Laura, surely a FAV. - J.A.B. %
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:49:00 PM
Your comments make me really happy! Thanks so much for the insight. I'm so glad you enjoyed. ~Laura
Date: 7/27/2013 6:42:00 AM
Amazing piece!!!! Such talent shines throughout... xx Michael
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:52:00 PM
Thanks a million, Michael. I am happy that you enjoyed. ~Laura
Date: 7/26/2013 11:10:00 AM
This one is seeping in emotions aura.This one is certainly a winner for me.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:54:00 PM
Mustapha; so glad for your visits. Thanks for the praise. ~Laura
Date: 7/25/2013 10:45:00 AM
SOUNDS LIKE MY DEVIOUS WAS HER NAME WRITE LIKE THE LAST LINE i THINK YOUR A PUSSY CAT REALLY YOU HAVE A REAL GOOD HEART HOPE YOU FIND SOMEONE NICE THANKS FOR COMENTS ON GIRLS WRITE WAS NOT HAPPY WITH WRITE AS i FEEL A LITTLE SILLY MAYBE GLASD YOU LIKE ITS ALL; THIS HEAT XXXDAVIDSCOTT
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:55:00 PM
I'll have to read your said poem. Thanks David ~Laura
Date: 7/24/2013 7:55:00 PM
And oh how you hiss, Laura!...Lethal venom in every line and I hope that poor fool heeded your warning and ran for that door (Or did you swallow him whole first?) In my humble opinion, this is by far your best effort - Tim
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:54:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Tim! `Laura
Date: 7/24/2013 12:31:00 PM
Wow! That is really something...A very strong and painful write. Were the capital words meant to be shouted in a way? And I certainly hope you don't think of yourself as an empty necessity?
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Date: 7/21/2013 10:10:00 AM
How nice that the truth is exposed quickly. Fool me twice--shame on me! You are quite the passionate one! When a woman takes on the form or image of a snake we are in a powerful realm that is also a confusing one--in a good way. This reminds me of the medusa in mythology. I would not want to be on your bad side!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:51:00 PM
Haha aww, thanks Duke. I appreciate your visits and insight. ~Laura
Date: 7/21/2013 7:33:00 AM
This had a hard sting. Dark, yet honest. This had heart, but the heart was fed-up in these lines. Intense work!
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Date: 7/21/2013 6:43:00 AM
- Laura, this was a poem that I enjoyed reading.:) - Thank you :) - Well done!! :) - Have a nice Sunday.:) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:56:00 PM
I love your visits, Anne, and your uplifting poetry. Stay awesome. ~Laura
Date: 7/21/2013 1:46:00 AM
a wealth of sizzling emotions flying through this. Enjoyed reading Shadow x smiles
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/29/2013 3:56:00 PM
I like how you worded that. Glad you enjoyed!! ~Laura

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