I Will Never Forget- That Day


A warm, September day, so many years ago;
our home was then aboard a large Marine Corps base.
Expecting our first-born with new moms shared, and so
my neighbor, friend next door, came over to our place.

A favor asked of me; to watch her newborn girl,
her little babe, just two weeks old, a precious one,
with chubby cheeks and rosebud lips, a tiny curl
upon her head.  To play with, watch her, oh, what fun!

Day after, all went well in early morning hours;
drank bottle in my arms then slept in her quilt bed,
bound snuggly in her wrap of white with pink flowers.
Before long, Mama picked her up, and off they fled.
 
That next day haunts me still.  Forever, will I mourn
the overnight crib death of my dear friend's newborn.

 
September 21, 2015

Contest: I Will Never Forget
Sponsor: Silent One

Form: Sonnet in Iambic Hexameter
True Story from September 1958 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mishra Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:10 AM
I am sorry to read this memory of yours. I hope the mother is well. Congratulations on your placement for this soulful poem Sandra :)
One Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 8:16 AM
A very well constructed sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Chansarkar Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 9:25 AM
sad and so perfectly written,Sandra!
Y. Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Hi Sandra, This is such a sad story. My condolences to all. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 5:17 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
Neumann Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Wow. Congratulations. I like the hint of the ambiguous denial. This is an excellent write.
A  Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Sandra, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT
Lindley Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:02 PM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN WITH THIS VERY SAD POEM. Back in 1973, my cousin lost his baby daughter due to crib death. I remember how sad and he and I by hand dug her grave.
Rebstock Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 5:42 PM
No sadder time then the loss of a child. Sorry for the loss of this precious baby. Sad poem.
Allison Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 5:32 PM
this brought a tear to my eye Sandra what a heartbreaking write - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Very sad, Sandra. The fear of every new parent. I couldn't sleep for days after we brought our first home.
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:29 AM
Yes, James, a terrible fear for sure. Since I was expecting my first child at the time, you can imagine, having experienced this first-hand, how fearful we were. Thanks for stopping by. Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Wonderful take on the theme Sandra with this superb winning write! Big congrats!
D. Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 9:38 PM
this was disturbing. ' thank you. Nate
Haight Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:26 AM
I enjoyed participating in your contest, Nathan, and I appreciate a placement on your winner's list. Thanks! Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 5:32 AM
Oh this is so sad Sandra. The fact that this is a true story is heartbreaking. These things happen and leave us forever asking why? This is a tender heartfelt write Sandra.
Haight Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 6:13 AM
Thank you for your visit and supportive comment, Connie. Yes, something like this stays with you forever for sure without any answers as to why. Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:26 AM
A sad piece worthy of a second look. This is a testament to the fragility of life that emphasizes our humanity and vulnerability in the worst of conditions. You have painted a picture with words that educate, sadden and move the reader. Emile.
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Hi Emile, yes, your words are so true about the fragility of life. This happening is one I will never forget no matter how many years go by. I appreciate your comments so much. Thank you, Sandra
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Sandra, I was hit tragically.. sad..sad..................but like I said even in dark poems you bring light mood to them but the message still there so strong,, ~Olive Eloisa
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Hi Olive, thank you for your visit and lovely comment. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 10:18 PM
sorry to hear it was a true story, dear. But amazing you can write about it after all these years. Isn't it wonderful how we can dredge up these things from our past and finally give them voice?
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Yes, Andrea, memories are with us forever, and the heart-wrenching ones never get buried too deep. This one came to me immediately when i read the contest theme, "dark and twisted." Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 5:55 PM
Heartbreaking story..I cant imagine the pain. Well written ! BG
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Thank you for your visit, Barbara, and nice comment. Yes...very heartbreaking. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:34 PM
very sad one and it sounds like a real story. So unfortunate when this happens to people. I wish we could enter old poems in this contest. Maybe we can. I have a few!!
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Hi Andrea, although this happened so long ago, I actually wrote this poem last night for the first time. Yes, it is a real story.
La France Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Sandra, so sad, what a horrible thing to have happen, for sure it would stay with you forever, is it true or fiction? and thanks for visiting my poem, obsession . .
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Thank you for visiting my poem, Broken. Yes, I did indicate that it was a true happening in 1958. It was so sad...and although she was happy for us, so sad for her when I had our son a few months later to be constantly reminded of her little one, since we lived so close together. Sandra
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