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I Will Never Forget

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I'll never forget the pain and the grief I felt at my mom's bedside when she died. As denial morphed into disbelief, reality loosed its arrow inside. An excruciating pain pierced my heart as Death's hand touched my mom's eternal soul. And helpless, I watched her life-force depart, as my splintered self no longer felt whole. Time, memorializing mom's passing, paused, as my universe came crashing down. And all the fears reason was amassing lead to the edge of a nervous breakdown. Engraved in my memory forever, that pain forms a bond that time can't sever. (Sonnet)

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/28/2023 6:26:00 AM

Very touching Emile. Congratulations on your win! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2023 8:07:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, much appreciated as always, my friend, Emile.

John Watt

Date: 5/18/2020 1:29:00 AM

Emile, I feel your grief in every word. There is only one mother - life changed forever the moment you lost her. I lost my mother in 2017 and I know what that moment feels like. Powerfully woven into this sonnet, congratulations for your win ~ Your friend, John

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2020 8:59:00 AM

Thanks so much John, my condolences for your loss my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/17/2020 9:02:00 AM

I wish you always carry a part of your mother and her personality within you as a blessing. Congratulations on the placement and for the beautiful expression of your love for her Emile :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2020 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Aditi, you have a compassionate heart my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 5/17/2020 8:10:00 AM

A sad sonnet, we never forget the love of a mother, especially one as lovely as yours.. great sonnet.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thanks Silent One, much appreciated as always, my friend, Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/13/2020 4:29:00 PM

A very touching write Emile, I can imagine how devastating it must be to lose a mother, mine's 82 and thankfully still going strong!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2020 9:39:00 AM

Thanks John, It is as you say...devastating, my friend, Emile.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/12/2020 5:07:00 PM

It is a sad day indeed, my friend; I am sad to think of it for you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2020 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Caren, you have a good heart my friend, Emile.