Jeremy Smith Poet Free verse

I Will Love You To Death

As the candles burn
our desires are set free
physically your body whispers delight
enticing the beast that slumbers within

My will I give to you
your love I now serve
as your seductive actions speak louder
enraging the beast locked within

praying I can worship you till the end
just open your mind and I will love you to death
each day I will prove my love and gratitude
by restraining the raging beast within

hoping you feel I am good enough
loving you to death is what I desire
I beg you to let me love you to death
for it's you that can relinquish the beast within

7/9/2017

Inspired by:
Type-O-Negative "Love You To Death"

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Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 9:55 PM Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Well done.

Connie Marcum Wong February 27, 2018 at 12:59 AM A truly passionate winning piece Jeremy! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! : )

Beautiful Scars February 26, 2018 at 5:35 AM I love the boldness you created first of all (layout) Your words speak of such deep passionate romance and love. So happy you feel that way! thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Funom Makama July 12, 2017 at 9:35 AM Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page. Jeremy Smith July 12, 2017 at 11:22 AM Thanks, Funom :) Your views and comments always appreciated!!

White Wolf July 9, 2017 at 7:51 PM Yes, love conquers all! I like how you have done this, Jeremy! Jeremy Smith July 9, 2017 at 7:57 PM Thank you, White Wolf :)