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I Will Love You To Death

As the candles burn our desires are set free physically your body whispers delight enticing the beast that slumbers within My will I give to you your love I now serve as your seductive actions speak louder enraging the beast locked within praying I can worship you till the end just open your mind and I will love you to death each day I will prove my love and gratitude by restraining the raging beast within hoping you feel I am good enough loving you to death is what I desire I beg you to let me love you to death for it's you that can relinquish the beast within 7/9/2017
Inspired by: Type-O-Negative "Love You To Death"

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Date: 3/6/2018 9:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Well done.
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Date: 2/27/2018 12:59:00 AM
A truly passionate winning piece Jeremy! Congratulations on your wonderful first placement! : )
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:35:00 AM
I love the boldness you created first of all (layout) Your words speak of such deep passionate romance and love. So happy you feel that way! thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:35:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/12/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks, Funom :) Your views and comments always appreciated!!
Date: 7/9/2017 7:51:00 PM
Yes, love conquers all! I like how you have done this, Jeremy!
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/9/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, White Wolf :)

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