I Will Be Yours

One day you wrote your name on a paper
unfortunately this paper was torn
Another day you wrote your name on the sands
a tide came and washed it away...

When you wrote your name on a stone
that stone was broken
Finally you wrote your name on my mind
that name was ever-persistent...

This universe will be perished one day
but love will persist for ever
Even if there is a life after the death
I will be yours....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/25/2014 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win in Brian's contest.
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Date: 3/6/2014 12:32:00 AM
Lovely poem...Seren Soupmail!!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:37:00 PM
Mohammad, love the win... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2014 12:03:00 AM
Nice presetationn
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations.
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 1/29/2014 12:50:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/29/2014 6:49:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 1/29/2014 12:50:00 PM
Many thanks
Date: 1/29/2014 12:03:00 AM
Beautifully written Abedin! I like how your poem alludes to the temporary nature of words written on tangible surfaces and the permanence brought by connecting with someone. Very well written!
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 1/29/2014 12:51:00 PM
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:01:00 PM
Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 1/29/2014 12:51:00 PM
Many thanks
Date: 1/16/2014 6:14:00 PM
Ther is life after death so your love is eternal.
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:52:00 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad
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