I Will Be Yours

One day you wrote your name on a paper
unfortunately this paper was torn
Another day you wrote your name on the sands
a tide came and washed it away...

When you wrote your name on a stone
that stone was broken
Finally you wrote your name on my mind
that name was ever-persistent...

This universe will be perished one day
but love will persist for ever
Even if there is a life after the death
I will be yours....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Yvonne Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations on your third place win in Brian's contest.
Roberts Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 12:32 AM
Lovely poem...Seren Soupmail!!!
A  Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Mohammad, love the win... . Hugs* SKAT
Islam Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Nice presetationn
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 9:42 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Congratulations.
Abedin Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Thanks
Mehta Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad
Abedin Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:50 PM
Many thanks
Tsiluma Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:03 AM
Beautifully written Abedin! I like how your poem alludes to the temporary nature of words written on tangible surfaces and the permanence brought by connecting with someone. Very well written!
Abedin Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Thanks
Jerden Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 8:01 PM
Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!
Abedin Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Many thanks
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2014 at 6:14 PM
Ther is life after death so your love is eternal.
Mehta Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 6:52 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Mohammad
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