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I will be the stars

I will be the stars The moon will be my mum The sun will be my dad The rain will be my brother The wind will be my sister The rainbows will be my friends The rocks will be my cousins The fountains will be my happy tears The waterfalls will be a nickname Of an edifice I carved for you Among the rocks and That I have chosen just for you The fields will be my attires The paper and the ink will be my parcels for you I tell my mum to rule the nights Take away sorrows of darkness from you Caress away your insomnia And clothe you With her cares That her night gleams your attires And I will be the stars I tell my dad to shine on you, sunbeam your countenance, away your damp with his warmth, and smile always at your hustle And I will tell my brother to feed you With the heavenly springs Flow on your droughts Feed your greens I will tell my sister to cool you With her tender breeze See that you are bathed With her oxygen I tell the rainbows Of how you wrote me Many poems of love And how we smile together As co stars And I will tell The Fields To weave you coat of many colours red, green, yellow, blue, violet, orange and indigo coloured The rainbows will lend a helping hand I will be the Stars I will tell the Fields to plant In your garden multiple colours of roses They will add a sunflower also I will tell them to fit in berries, red, blue, multiple berries And I will be the stars Up above among heavenly Bodies, I will shine as the firmament Daniel chapter twelve holding three And brighten your tomorrow Shining your prayers to God Almighty Alone First PLACE WIN STRAND NO 800 ,any theme,any form FINALE 6/16/2020

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Date: 7/16/2020 5:08:00 AM
Simplicity carrying the reader by your childlike purity. I'm sure that you could build upon this. This has volumes of even greater potecial. Bravo, frind. This all goes to say, I didn't want this to end.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 8:48:00 AM
Wow ...James You just too brilliant.. Interesting your comments ..as my heart sings you appreciation.....and my tongue sprays thanks.
Date: 7/15/2020 9:55:00 AM
Gideon, This write., so enriched with a family for the ages and a home fitting for the heavenly host. -Richard
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/16/2020 1:59:00 AM
Thanks. Richard my grateful heart strings you greetings
Date: 7/12/2020 5:28:00 PM
Back to read your beautiful poem again...such a joy! Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/12/2020 10:17:00 PM
Wow !!! Again that kind of you Rhonda thanks a lot Lovely day ahead of you always
Date: 7/1/2020 2:59:00 PM
I love the theme of this poem and how nicely it flows all the way through
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 7/1/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thanks a lot Ciara Your comments
Date: 6/28/2020 3:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win - the stars are your's to grasp.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/28/2020 11:03:00 PM
Thanks a lot God bless you
Date: 6/28/2020 11:55:00 AM
Hello Gideon Idudle, Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day my friend.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/28/2020 11:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot Darlene Quite along time now Cheers
Date: 6/27/2020 4:56:00 PM
Gideon, A great, imaginative write with great witnesses in the final stanza. Congratulations on your win! David
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/27/2020 6:49:00 PM
Thanks a lot David Your wonderful comments My grateful heart...
Date: 6/20/2020 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in this premiere contest Gideon. Well deserved! Blessings xxoo
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/21/2020 5:47:00 AM
Thanks My Appreciation goes to you Wong. You inspire me alot
Date: 6/20/2020 11:25:00 AM
You have a wild and wonderful creative imagination, Gideon. This poem is a real pleasure to read - and speak!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/20/2020 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Brewer For Your kind words My grateful Heart
Date: 6/20/2020 6:48:00 AM
So beautifully written, so touching Dear Poet! The images are stunning! Congratulations on your win!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/20/2020 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Choudhury Am very grateful Awesome are your words To inspire me
Date: 6/19/2020 6:11:00 PM
Gideon, a beautiful and bountiful write of many glorious images of nature and family. Your poem glistens with positivity, faith and generosity, just the kind I enjoy reading. Congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend. Blessings ~ John
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 11:25:00 PM
Wow many thanks goes to you Very appreciative me I say again thanks a lot John.
Date: 6/19/2020 5:10:00 AM
You are a poet who inspires with your so graceful and beautiful poetry! A poem that impresses and delights the soul! Congratulations on your POTD honour, Gideon! A worthy recognition! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thanks a lot For your heartfelt comments Besma ! Cheers
Date: 6/19/2020 1:04:00 AM
Bountifully Beautiful, Cheerfully Caressing, Wonderfully Plentiful, Delightfully Grateful, Mindfully Relishing, Delicately Tasteful, Heartfelt, Mind blowing, Historical Appreciative, Congratulated Facilitation, Lovingly and Lavishly, Heavily Heavenly, heartily Tenderly, poetically ink dripping comments, committed on, Me my write-ups, mind's wall, Showering Architectures, Exquisitely Garnished on Me. God Bless You All . .....From My Poetic Heart .Gideon
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Date: 6/18/2020 10:16:00 PM
Very nice, Gideon. Belated congrats on your well deserved POTD. All the best.. Charlie
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thanks Charles God bless
Date: 6/18/2020 9:17:00 PM
A very inspiring write Gideon, belated congrats on POTD!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:04:00 AM
Thanks John Appreciation From my inner Heart
Date: 6/18/2020 6:29:00 PM
"I will be the stars" Such a beautiful thought. The entire poem is uplifting, inspiring and heartwarming. Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Gideon, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:07:00 AM
Thanks Brandy My Appreciation goes to you Remain bless for these wonderful comments
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thanks Brandy My Appreciation goes to you Remain bless for these wonderful comments
Date: 6/18/2020 5:20:00 PM
Your poem is stunning, Gideon! I love the familial connections to your imagery...very beautiful. Congrats on your win and POTD honor. This a special poem and fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:13:00 AM
An thanks again for the Favo.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 12:11:00 AM
O thanks a lot Rhonda J Am very grateful for your Comments
Date: 6/18/2020 1:46:00 PM
Hurray..Back to you with my heartily congratulations for your well deserved work brother. Congrats for being posted on "Poem of the Day" page..:-) Poem to be celebrated by all of us.:-) Keep writing bro..Best wishes:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 4:31:00 PM
Am really grateful brother God bless
Date: 6/18/2020 1:43:00 PM
I am very pleased to see your lovely poem honored with POTD Gideon. Congratulations my friend! I loved learning more about the Egba people at this wonderful website Gideon. https://kwekudee-tripdownmemorylane.blogspot.com/2014/08/egba-people-yoruba-sub-tribe-of-freedom.html Blessings xxoo
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 4:28:00 PM
Wow that interesting Thanks
Date: 6/18/2020 11:50:00 AM
So beautiful, Gideon. You spun out your metaphor into your verses with beautiful, tender imagery. Congratulations on your POTD. Well deserved!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thanks goes to You From my grateful heart Sam
Date: 6/18/2020 11:16:00 AM
Incredible images you have woven with your many colors of words. Congrats on a win and the POTD.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 11:22:00 AM
O ! thanks McGee Very grateful Your comments on my Write
Date: 6/18/2020 10:09:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous! Well written! Right in my faves! Congratulations. You really deserve it!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/19/2020 11:31:00 PM
Bless you again and again Wanter Grateful heart from me goes to you sincerely
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thanks for the fave Wanter
Date: 6/18/2020 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD with this beautifully written poem! :)
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 10:33:00 AM
Appreciate your comments Thanks Heidi
Date: 6/18/2020 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Gideon, POTD very well earned. Great write.
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 10:36:00 AM
My many more thanks goes to You Lawrence.
Date: 6/18/2020 7:29:00 AM
Epic in heart filled imagery, phenomenal poem Gideon! Congratulations for its success, a classic in the making this. Pat your muse on the back for me, hugs for you! xomo
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 6/18/2020 8:31:00 AM
Interesting !!! Many a thanks Tart
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