I Will Be Lying

Mustn’t I write once today
even if
I’ve not much to say
It is what I must do
Use a jackhammer
let the pavement vibrate
with my pastel sky sneakers
somehow or another
give the illusion that I can move
the earth

I will be lying on a table
getting a massage
not a nicety. I really,
really need circulation
until I can see the man
with the stethoscope 

Helplessly my body
from head to toe
in enmity. Medi…care!
Focused on the thirty day
wait to see new doc

so I can stick out my tongue
and sound like a hypochondriac
will I make his day
or will the cogs in his lids
be going round and round
in his head

Well, seems I’ve said too much
Just wanted to stay in touch
“ahhh….ahhh. My tongue’s red, Doc.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delegans Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 8:57 PM
I love how honest and real this is while being funny in frustration but vulnerable in truth. We must forge ahead to keep writing. Good job, Kim!
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 2:57 AM
An apple a day. A poem a day. Well done. Keep up your Golden pen, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, my wonderful friend! Hugs
Wolf Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 7:15 PM
Looks like you've moved several readers --- if not the earth. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:38 AM
LOL! xx
Leake Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Nicely done Kim Enjoyed this one Are you sure your tongue's red Best wishes Kevin
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Could be blushing ;)
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 11:10 AM
- Tiring days ... even with the pastel colored shoes, Kim :) - Have a lovely weekend no matter what color your tongue is :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 5:40 AM
My husband wanted to go out yesterday but I truly needed some rest. Better today. Have a lovely weekend too! Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 8:18 PM
one of those bad hair days but you'll thrive...vibrant write, kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Thank you, Nette! :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:44 PM
appreciate the humor in your situation. Sorry, however, for what you're enduing...sending hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Hind Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:40 PM
I almost wish I could serve you some "soup" lol. But seriously, I am so so sorry for what you're going through. I am glad when you take time to write, I love your work so much. Best wishes, TLC, prayers, hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Paige!
DiMino Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Not fun, I know. Hate going to doctors. I have found that they are good with diagnosis but not treatment. Most always go the homeopathic route. Use an incline, upside down board. Has kept me mobile for years. Start gradually, till complete upside down slant. Talk to doctor first to make certain there are no serious medical conditions that would prohibit such therapy. I have bone to bone in neck, hips -- this has worked for me. Made me keep a bit taller as well. Still am very athletic, martial arts, etc.. Blessings my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 12:26 PM
I’ve tried the table and also a therapeutic massage a couple times. The epidural worked for a few months. Not the best but it does the job…sigh. Will see what the new doc says.
Rolland Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 7:30 AM
you made me smile, i seen a doctor frequently for my diabetes, you really find the spirit and emotion, nicely written, enjoyed
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, Yann! Yup, that too…yikes
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