I Was Paddling Down On the Lake In My Canoe

I was paddling down on the lake in my canoe

Written By Dean Masciarelli

August 2, 2010 (12:30am)



I was paddling down on the lake in my canoe

Waiting for the early morning sunrise
and wishing 
that I could be right in front of you

So that we could both look into each other eyes
and enjoy the peacefulness that transformed in the skies

Because it would be so nice to share the smiles 
that we would have on our faces
as we both shared some very pleasant conversations

But you see I haven’t even had the chance to meet you

But I have dreamt about you countless times

And let me tell you when I finally do meet you

I will truly be more then pleasantly surprised

Because in my heart I will know without a doubt
that you will be
the one who can make all of my dreams come true
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Segal Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 9:59 AM
Beautiful poem, a lovely write, love Simone
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 4:11 AM
A nice write well expressed, Dean
Arteaga Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 10:52 PM
very nice, lovely filling poem c:
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