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I Was a Soldier's Soldier

The cavalry charged, leading the way The infantry advanced, joining the fray As for me, I was up to a little deviltry Donned my goggles ~ battled virtual reality

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Date: 8/24/2022 4:43:00 PM
Wouldn't that be lovely--to settle our disputes virtually. Perhaps when people have been replaced by computers.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/24/2022 5:47:00 PM
You mean, gasp! I'm still human?! Perish the thought.
Date: 8/23/2022 2:12:00 PM
That is the best way to fight a war my friend. Visual combat no one gets hurt. So many of these young kids spend too much time virtually. That will probably be the future wars ha ha...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/24/2022 5:49:00 PM
Future wars will look more like the one in Ukraine, I'm afraid, ending with an A-bomb or such. I don't put much stock in cyber-wars...
Date: 8/23/2022 12:28:00 PM
I see this as brilliant humor! Let me know if I am in error, please? Thank you… Best to you, Panagiota xxx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2022 7:02:00 PM
Cogito, ergo errare... As for you, you got it right. ~ Overthinking things
Date: 8/23/2022 10:21:00 AM
Mortal Combat perhaps?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2022 7:02:00 PM
Perhaps combat mortl
Date: 8/23/2022 8:05:00 AM
Interesting thought on virtual reality. I have no idea what it is about, really. I'm what you could call "virtually ignorant."
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2022 7:03:00 PM
ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha... Great comment, Milt Terrific ...
Date: 8/23/2022 7:32:00 AM
I too am battling virtual reality but doing it with losing weight in mind…not in mind, in body…lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2022 10:52:00 AM
LOL! Under the headset, it feels that way.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/23/2022 7:04:00 PM
Myself, I'm 'virtually' weightless. lol.
Date: 8/22/2022 9:38:00 PM
Interesting couplets with great rhyming !
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