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I Want You, Lol

I’m not content being your poetry mistress … make me your Mrs! Flirt With Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 08/25/20
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Neumann Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations. Means to an end ...
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2020 at 10:20 AM
thanks Kai:-) hugs Jan xx
Deepa Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 4:19 AM
Back to you with my congratulations dear Jan mam:-) .Have a lovely day.Much love:-)
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 2:48 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:12 AM
Very smooth, Jan, a nice touch, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
Mitra Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:10 AM
I like this ha ha :) Congrats on your win Jan.
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 7:12 PM
Awesome Monoku, Jan, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
Watt Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:56 PM
You were right about the contest filling up quickly, and I was right about Bobby loving it... congrats on your win, Jan! Hugs ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM
LOL very cute, Jan. Girl power ~
May Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 3:40 PM
Congratulations on your "WIN" this one made me turn red sis, lol love ya!
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Oh, GOOD one, Jan! Janice
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 2:43 PM
thanks Janice i think Bobby will have fun judging this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Romios Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 9:57 AM
A delight as always. Pangie Xx
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Panagiota:-) hugs jan x
White Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations JA, if you propose does he wear the dress? Lol kelli
Allison Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 10:56 AM
lol I proposed to my hubby ... and he wore a suit ... the only one he has ever owned and he's going to get good use out of it as he wants to be cremated in it lol:-) hugs jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:30 PM
That would ensure he never misses you again! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:33 PM
lol thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:46 PM
Now that's an offer no sane man would refuse Jan. Is it someone we know lol. Tom
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 4:14 PM
lol I actually proposed to my hubby Tom - silly man said yes lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Jan, hey, I need to know something. are we supposed to call it by the exact name: I want you?? I am so mixed up. I better look down the list of how people are doing it!!! GREAT job with yours.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 3:31 PM
yes the title has to be "I want you lol" - I too missed it in the rules:-) hugs Jan xx
Callus Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:34 PM
She flirts, but I'm sure deep down she means it, and now the ball is in his court, lol! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thanks Paul, I proposed to my hubby - silly guy said yes lol:-) hugs jan xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Hello Jan, I like this poem. I do-I do. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 26, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Heloo Jan, you are welcome/ enjoy your day. Higs.
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 1:41 PM
thanks Darlene:-) hugs jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 11:28 AM
I do, I do!!!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 11:48 AM
lol:-) I'm not sure what my hubby would have to say lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Cute...so cute!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 9:48 AM
thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:46 AM
Too cute Jan and love the pic. We've come a long way Baby. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:59 AM
lol thanks Judy:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Cute, flirtatious monoku, Jan. Sure Bobby will love it! Hugs ~ John
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:35 AM
I hope he does John:-) the contest will fill fast I am sure:-) hugs jan x
Deepa Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:26 AM
Lovely monoko with beautiful displayed image:-) Good luck for the contest dear Jan mam.. Have a great day.Much love from Deepa:-)
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 8:27 AM
thanks V deepa:-) hugs Jan xx
Shatry Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:12 AM
A simple but compelling declaration of love. Good luck Jan!
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thanks Alwi its just a fun poem:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:11 AM
- Sweet written, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 7:13 AM
ooh I missed that bit thanks my friend i will amend it now:-) hugs jan xx
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