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I’m not content being your poetry mistress … make me your Mrs! Flirt With Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May 08/25/20

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Date: 8/28/2020 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations. Means to an end ...
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2020 10:20:00 AM
thanks Kai:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/27/2020 4:19:00 AM
Back to you with my congratulations dear Jan mam:-) .Have a lovely day.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/27/2020 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with the this awesome monoku. Warm regards, Rama
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Date: 8/27/2020 2:48:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2020 12:12:00 AM
Very smooth, Jan, a nice touch, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/27/2020 12:10:00 AM
I like this ha ha :) Congrats on your win Jan.
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Date: 8/26/2020 7:12:00 PM
Awesome Monoku, Jan, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/26/2020 3:56:00 PM
You were right about the contest filling up quickly, and I was right about Bobby loving it... congrats on your win, Jan! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 8/26/2020 3:49:00 PM
LOL very cute, Jan. Girl power ~
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Date: 8/26/2020 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your "WIN" this one made me turn red sis, lol love ya!
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Date: 8/26/2020 11:11:00 AM
Oh, GOOD one, Jan! Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2020 2:43:00 PM
thanks Janice i think Bobby will have fun judging this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations JA, if you propose does he wear the dress? Lol kelli
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2020 10:56:00 AM
lol I proposed to my hubby ... and he wore a suit ... the only one he has ever owned and he's going to get good use out of it as he wants to be cremated in it lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 4:30:00 PM
That would ensure he never misses you again! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 4:33:00 PM
lol thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 3:46:00 PM
Now that's an offer no sane man would refuse Jan. Is it someone we know lol. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 4:14:00 PM
lol I actually proposed to my hubby Tom - silly man said yes lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 3:25:00 PM
Jan, hey, I need to know something. are we supposed to call it by the exact name: I want you?? I am so mixed up. I better look down the list of how people are doing it!!! GREAT job with yours.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 3:31:00 PM
yes the title has to be "I want you lol" - I too missed it in the rules:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 1:34:00 PM
She flirts, but I'm sure deep down she means it, and now the ball is in his court, lol! Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 1:42:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I proposed to my hubby - silly guy said yes lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 12:04:00 PM
Hello Jan, I like this poem. I do-I do. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/26/2020 6:27:00 AM
Heloo Jan, you are welcome/ enjoy your day. Higs.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 1:41:00 PM
thanks Darlene:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 11:28:00 AM
I do, I do!!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 11:48:00 AM
lol:-) I'm not sure what my hubby would have to say lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 9:32:00 AM
Cute...so cute!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 9:48:00 AM
thanks Kim:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 8:46:00 AM
Too cute Jan and love the pic. We've come a long way Baby. God Bless, JB
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 8:59:00 AM
lol thanks Judy:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 8:34:00 AM
Cute, flirtatious monoku, Jan. Sure Bobby will love it! Hugs ~ John
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 8:35:00 AM
I hope he does John:-) the contest will fill fast I am sure:-) hugs jan x
Date: 8/25/2020 8:26:00 AM
Lovely monoko with beautiful displayed image:-) Good luck for the contest dear Jan mam.. Have a great day.Much love from Deepa:-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 8:27:00 AM
thanks V deepa:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 7:12:00 AM
A simple but compelling declaration of love. Good luck Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Alwi its just a fun poem:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 7:11:00 AM
- Sweet written, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 7:13:00 AM
ooh I missed that bit thanks my friend i will amend it now:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/25/2020 7:08:00 AM
How could he possibly refuse that flirt! lol Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/25/2020 7:13:00 AM
thanks Jenna:-) hugs jan xx
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