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I Want You, Lol

as you ogle at me ~will submerge you whole in my dilating skin Aug 25, 2020 First place in the contest:-) Note:Flirt with me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May

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John Castellenas

Date: 9/20/2020 9:59:00 PM

Wonderful use of words. Made the reader feel and understand every word.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/30/2020 12:27:00 AM

Looks like both are in for a delightful romantic experience, my friend! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

V. Deepa
Date: 9/2/2020 2:04:00 PM

Hello Paul sir, Thankyou for your kind visit and the lovely review along with beautiful appreciation:-) Best wishes for you too.Take care. Warm regards.:-)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/28/2020 8:11:00 AM

Congratulations, Deepa! You are terrific with these one liners

V. Deepa
Date: 8/29/2020 8:45:00 AM

Thankyou dear Kim mam for your kind visit and uplifting words:-) Am glad you enjoyed my works. Take care.Much love to you:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2020 9:51:00 PM

Back with my congrats on your awesome win

V. Deepa
Date: 8/28/2020 2:50:00 AM

Thankyou dear Andrea mam for your constant support and appreciations:-) Have a lovely day.:-)Much love

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/27/2020 9:09:00 AM

Very nice thought, like an amoeba! Congrats on your top win!!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 11:29:00 AM

Thankyou for the kind appreciation dear Krish sir:-) Yes, may be like an amoeba.Rofl :-D:-P Have a great day.:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2020 6:59:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats Deepa on your podium win!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 11:26:00 AM

Thanks a bunch for your re-visit and cheerful wishes Vijay sir:-) Have a beautiful day.:-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/27/2020 6:43:00 AM

Very descriptive WINNING one-liner, Deepa! Janice

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 6:46:00 AM

Thankyou dear Janice mam:-) for the visit and lovely appreciation.:-) Have a beautiful day.!!

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/27/2020 5:36:00 AM

Well done and congratulations to you V.Deepa. Howard

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 6:32:00 AM

Thankyou for the kind visit and appreciation Howard sir:-) Best wishes for you too. Take care.Warm regards.:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 2:50:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:16:00 AM

Thankyou for the double support and wishes dear Anne mam:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love.:-)

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 12:31:00 AM

Visually enticing, Deepa, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:14:00 AM

Thanks a bunch for your visit, kind appreciation, support and well wishes dear William sir.:-) Am pleased to know you enjoyed my Muse.Take Care, stay safe and enjoy your day.Best wishes from Deepa:-)

Carol Mitra

Date: 8/27/2020 12:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:12:00 AM

Thankyou Carol mam for your kind visit and appreciation.:-) Take care.Warm regards:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:17:00 PM

Very romantic Monoku, Deepa, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:11:00 AM

Thankyou dear Eve mam for your continual support , encouragement and appreciations:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love:-)

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 4:00:00 PM

Congrats on your win! ~ John

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:10:00 AM

Thankyou for re-visiting my work and for the kind appreciation dear John sir.:-) Take care.Warm regards sent to you.

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement Deepa!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:08:00 AM

Thankyou Bobby sir for the kind appreciation and encouragement.:-) Am glad you liked my work.:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards.~Deepa:-)

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 10:43:00 AM

Nice flirtatious, subcutaneous monoku, Deepa. Best wishes in the contest ~ John

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:07:00 AM

Thankyou dear John sir, Tried to be flirtatious with my poetry,lol. Wow," subcutaneous" a medical term used for complimenting my work.:-) Have a lovely day.:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:40:00 PM

Deep indeed. Under the skin!!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:05:00 AM

Thankyou dear Andrea mam:-) Yes, tried to write a deep monoku;-) Have a beautiful day.Much love

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2020 12:56:00 PM

Hello Deepa, Wow! I do think you will win te contest. Good luck. Much love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/27/2020 12:01:00 PM

Hello Deepa, yes i am doing well. i hope all is well with you. Take care. Much love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:04:00 AM

Thankyou very much dear Darlene mam for your best wishes and appreciation:-) I believe your doing well. Take care.Much love..:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 10:50:00 AM

- Awesome line, Deepa :) - I've also posted to both of these contest today :)) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:02:00 AM

Thankyou dear Anne mam for your kind support and appreciation.:-) Is it..Will check yours..soon..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2020 9:24:00 AM

What a line!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:01:00 AM

Thankyou for the visit and appreciation dear Kim mam:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 8:21:00 AM

Sounds like a flirt and promise to merge--well written, Deepa.

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 3:01:00 AM

Thanks for dwelling deep into my single line dear Vijay sir.:-) And.. Thankyou for your kind support and appreciation:-) Have a bright day.Take care.