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I Want You, Lol

as you ogle at me ~will submerge you whole in my dilating skin

Aug 25, 2020

First place in the contest:-)
Note:Flirt with me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Bobby May

hyperboleromantic lovesensualsoulmatemonoku

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John Castellenas

September 20, 2020 at 9:59 PM

Wonderful use of words. Made the reader feel and understand every word.

Paul Callus

August 30, 2020 at 12:27 AM

Looks like both are in for a delightful romantic experience, my friend! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

V. Deepa

September 2, 2020 at 2:04 PM

Hello Paul sir, Thankyou for your kind visit and the lovely review along with beautiful appreciation:-) Best wishes for you too.Take care. Warm regards.:-)

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2020 at 8:11 AM

Congratulations, Deepa! You are terrific with these one liners

V. Deepa

August 29, 2020 at 8:45 AM

Thankyou dear Kim mam for your kind visit and uplifting words:-) Am glad you enjoyed my works. Take care.Much love to you:-)

Andrea Dietrich

August 27, 2020 at 9:51 PM

Back with my congrats on your awesome win

V. Deepa

August 28, 2020 at 2:50 AM

Thankyou dear Andrea mam for your constant support and appreciations:-) Have a lovely day.:-)Much love

Krish Radhakrishna

August 27, 2020 at 9:09 AM

Very nice thought, like an amoeba! Congrats on your top win!!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 11:29 AM

Thankyou for the kind appreciation dear Krish sir:-) Yes, may be like an amoeba.Rofl :-D:-P Have a great day.:-)

Vijay Pandit

August 27, 2020 at 6:59 AM

Back with BIG congrats Deepa on your podium win!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 11:26 AM

Thanks a bunch for your re-visit and cheerful wishes Vijay sir:-) Have a beautiful day.:-)

Janice Canerdy

August 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM

Very descriptive WINNING one-liner, Deepa! Janice

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 6:46 AM

Thankyou dear Janice mam:-) for the visit and lovely appreciation.:-) Have a beautiful day.!!

Howard Kerr

August 27, 2020 at 5:36 AM

Well done and congratulations to you V.Deepa. Howard

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 6:32 AM

Thankyou for the kind visit and appreciation Howard sir:-) Best wishes for you too. Take care.Warm regards.:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 27, 2020 at 2:50 AM

- Back with a congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise :)

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:16 AM

Thankyou for the double support and wishes dear Anne mam:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love.:-)

William Kelii Kekaula

August 27, 2020 at 12:31 AM

Visually enticing, Deepa, my compliments on your 1st Place win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:14 AM

Thanks a bunch for your visit, kind appreciation, support and well wishes dear William sir.:-) Am pleased to know you enjoyed my Muse.Take Care, stay safe and enjoy your day.Best wishes from Deepa:-)

Carol Mitra

August 27, 2020 at 12:14 AM

Congrats on your win Deepa.

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:12 AM

Thankyou Carol mam for your kind visit and appreciation.:-) Take care.Warm regards:-)

Eve Roper

August 26, 2020 at 7:17 PM

Very romantic Monoku, Deepa, congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:11 AM

Thankyou dear Eve mam for your continual support , encouragement and appreciations:-) Have a lovely day.Take care.Much love:-)

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 4:00 PM

Congrats on your win! ~ John

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:10 AM

Thankyou for re-visiting my work and for the kind appreciation dear John sir.:-) Take care.Warm regards sent to you.

Bobby May

August 26, 2020 at 3:46 PM

Congratulations on your placement Deepa!

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:08 AM

Thankyou Bobby sir for the kind appreciation and encouragement.:-) Am glad you liked my work.:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards.~Deepa:-)

John Watt

August 26, 2020 at 10:43 AM

Nice flirtatious, subcutaneous monoku, Deepa. Best wishes in the contest ~ John

V. Deepa

August 27, 2020 at 3:07 AM

Thankyou dear John sir, Tried to be flirtatious with my poetry,lol. Wow," subcutaneous" a medical term used for complimenting my work.:-) Have a lovely day.:-)