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I Want You

Eyes meet-lick lips-look away-send a note over Date Written: 8/24/2020

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V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 6:10:00 AM

Woah..lovely line Paula mam:-) Congrats on your win:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love:-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 2:01:00 PM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. Enjoy your day writing away......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Paula :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day with a hug...............

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 1:10:00 AM

Articulately said, Paula, my compliments on your win, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 1:57:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day writing away................

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:28:00 PM

Great Monoku, Paula, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thank You, for your note, and for your congratulations. It was an honor to win. Glad you like this write. It was a fun write. Enjoy your day with a hug...............

John Watt

Date: 8/26/2020 4:35:00 PM

Nicely done, Paula. Congrats on your win ~ John

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 1:48:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to win. Glad you like this. Enjoy your day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:31:00 PM

ooh la la!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

Mark Koplin

Date: 8/25/2020 6:13:00 AM

Great message sent, brings back memories of school. Good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2020 9:00:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. Oh Yes, old school day memories. Have a wonderful day..................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/25/2020 3:59:00 AM

This is interesting. Enjoyed reading the note. lol

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/24/2020 7:56:00 PM

Ooh! Very much 'forward-toward.' Two thumbs up, Paula! Smiles for Miles, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2020 8:55:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day writing away..................

Paul Callus

Date: 8/24/2020 3:04:00 PM

One of those cases when no extra words are needed, Paula... the message is well delivered! Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2020 3:10:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day..................