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I Want To Be Your Smile

I want to be your love

I want to be your love
I want to be your kiss
when tender dawn pours 
its loving caress
upon your azure eyes.
I want to be the kiss
that eats the honey
of your lips.
I want to be a breeze
that wafts you 
to your dreams.
I want to be your smile
when tears swell up
in your eyes, ready
to wet your face, the face
I used to dream of.
I want to be your tears
when your happiness
has no other way
to let it free.
I want to be a vase 
to treasure your smell
that kisses its way
into my veins.

I love you,
what more to say?

Copyright © Vassilis Comporozos | Year Posted 2012

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Red Fiery Date: 3/8/2016 8:59:00 PM such a lovely song...i hope your desire to love this lady gets fulfilled...excellent write ! you should be writing more...u have a talent ! Login to Reply

Mary Thompson Date: 12/3/2013 1:35:00 AM Very colorful feelings of love. I enjoyed the emotion it emitted. Login to Reply Vassilis Comporozos Date: 12/4/2013 5:43:00 AM Thank you!

Jake Ponce Date: 10/20/2013 3:28:00 AM This piece is an example of poems I've always wanted to write but never could. Your poetic language is very unique. The words are sharp but they do so subtly. Images race one after the other but they don't overwhelm. I'm now beginning to wonder who your poetic influence(s) is/are. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/29/2012 5:01:00 PM wonderful love poem. Light & Love Login to Reply

Michael Smith Date: 10/10/2012 12:54:00 PM You have a way with words. Login to Reply

Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 9/20/2012 4:37:00 PM What a beautiful, loving poems. I could feel your emotions pour down the page as I read this! Lovely! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/6/2012 7:32:00 AM This is so beautiful Vassilis, such elegants written here, awesome. Login to Reply Vassilis Comporozos Date: 9/6/2012 8:50:00 AM Thanks for your kind comment!

Cindy Cayton Date: 9/2/2012 1:52:00 PM Far out! Just beautiful!!! Cindy Lu~ Login to Reply Vassilis Comporozos Date: 9/6/2012 8:52:00 AM Thanks a lot for your nice words!

Archontoula Alexandropoulou Date: 8/12/2012 11:27:00 AM Far away from everything I used to be, cast away from everything I used to love, I lie helpless at your shores Altlandis, outlandish, at your land at last, Atlas. I had forgotten the taste of the earth marooned out of my land clad in a salty veil, I had forgotten what tasty food feels like, my love, my salt, alas, Atlas, at last you curdle my blood and make my heart stop, I can do without you, and yet will not whatmore to say? Alas, Atlas, Atlandis Login to Reply