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I Want To Be Your Secret

The Picture is the top to a clock I built, showing off a little. lol



I am a carpenter so I want to be a saw
So that you could see who I really am
I want to be a drill
So that I could make love to you

I want to be the Glue
So that I can stick to you
I want to be wood filler
So that I can fullfil all your dreams

I want to be sandpaper
So that I can smooth all your edges
I want to be a wood clamp
So I can hold you tight at night

I want to be shiny like Lacquer
So you can see my bright smile
I want to be a completed project
I want to be your everything
  

Date: 01/05/2019
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger
Contest Name: If I Had A Secret Life

Copyright © Bobby May | Year Posted 2019

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Sandra L. Weiss Date: 2/2/2019 11:39:00 PM Congrats, Bobby on your win with this enjoyable and well written verse. Good luck with your secret life. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/2/2019 5:23:00 PM Your art is outstand and I would be very proud to show. A very real creative story, Bobby, enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 2/2/2019 8:44:00 AM Hi Bobby, I'm just coming back to say congratulations in your fine win:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/5/2019 6:33:00 AM Cont-Excellent job! It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/5/2019 6:31:00 AM WoW! Bobby, First of all I want to say your work is impressive and something to be proud of. The clock looks amazing! You my friend are such a good writer. I don't think you even know how good you are. A love like you so skillfully wrote about could never be a secret! I especially liked the lines" I want to be a Glue,So that I can stick to you I want to be wood filler,So that I can fulfil all your dreams." If one had a love like that, they would want to give it right back to the giver! Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 1/5/2019 6:43:00 AM Are you flirting with me Alexis, lol Thank you for your kind words my friend you always give me encouragement.

Silent One Date: 1/5/2019 5:26:00 AM Bobby, you get better and better by the day...my new poem has some similar lines to this and a similar theme, but it is about love.... I like the comparisons in this one... Especially the sandpaper one... Login to Reply Bobby May Date: 1/5/2019 5:33:00 AM Thank You Silent One I learned from the best my friend :-), I like the sandpaper part myself lol Happy New Year!! Stay safe!