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I Want To Be Your Secret

The Picture is the top to a clock I built, showing off a little. lol I am a carpenter so I want to be a saw So that you could see who I really am I want to be a drill So that I could make love to you I want to be the Glue So that I can stick to you I want to be wood filler So that I can fullfil all your dreams I want to be sandpaper So that I can smooth all your edges I want to be a wood clamp So I can hold you tight at night I want to be shiny like Lacquer So you can see my bright smile I want to be a completed project I want to be your everything Date: 01/05/2019 Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger Contest Name: If I Had A Secret Life

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/2/2019 11:39:00 PM

Congrats, Bobby on your win with this enjoyable and well written verse. Good luck with your secret life.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2019 5:23:00 PM

Your art is outstand and I would be very proud to show. A very real creative story, Bobby, enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/2/2019 8:44:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I'm just coming back to say congratulations in your fine win:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2019 6:33:00 AM

Cont-Excellent job! It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2019 6:31:00 AM

WoW! Bobby, First of all I want to say your work is impressive and something to be proud of. The clock looks amazing! You my friend are such a good writer. I don't think you even know how good you are. A love like you so skillfully wrote about could never be a secret! I especially liked the lines" I want to be a Glue,So that I can stick to you I want to be wood filler,So that I can fulfil all your dreams." If one had a love like that, they would want to give it right back to the giver!

Bobby May
Date: 1/5/2019 6:43:00 AM

Are you flirting with me Alexis, lol Thank you for your kind words my friend you always give me encouragement.

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2019 5:26:00 AM

Bobby, you get better and better by the day...my new poem has some similar lines to this and a similar theme, but it is about love.... I like the comparisons in this one... Especially the sandpaper one...

Bobby May
Date: 1/5/2019 5:33:00 AM

Thank You Silent One I learned from the best my friend :-), I like the sandpaper part myself lol Happy New Year!! Stay safe!