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I Want A Funny

I took my new friend from Mars, to the store not to the bars. He was accompanied by his little green dog, many thought he was a funny looking frog. They messed their little green suits, so no more fresh fruits. A diaper they will need, so they can go home and be freed.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/6/2025 5:59:00 PM

Hi Paula, I felt that this was hilarious and interesting. Enjoyed reading

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/6/2025 4:32:00 PM

Perhaps it would have been better to take your friends to a bar, but then perhaps if they’d had too much to drink they’d have filled their diapers to the brink. Enjoyed your funny write Paula… Beryl

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/6/2025 3:49:00 PM

Hi Paul, this was very entertaining and very creative, ")

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2025 3:14:00 PM

Creative thinking on this one for sure. LOL..So like humans are they that too much fruit creates havoc on the digestive system? Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/6/2025 12:33:00 PM

- Back after my summer vacation ... and the first poem I read is this imaginative and funny poem ... best wishes in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 7/6/2025 12:31:00 PM

Yeah, best to stick with Alpo. Even alien mutts need balanced nutrition, apparently

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/6/2025 11:32:00 AM

"They messed their little green suits, so no more fresh fruits." Love it! Surround our planet with fruit satellites and we will be free from invasions. Instead of a rain of conquering terror.... Green Party should love this.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2025 10:25:00 AM

I Want A Funny ~ Date Written: 7/6/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...