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I Wandered Lonely As a Child

'I Wandered Lonely As A Cloud' by William Wordsworth I wandered lonely as a child That missed the gold and rolling hills, When suddenly a crystal sea A host of silver stars to fill Behind the moon, below God's knees Sparkled like glitter above the breeze Continuous as God's love sublime Smiling down upon our way, Those twinkling eyes, watchers of time Majestic rays of other's day Awed, I knew there was no chance That this was merely happenstance. The moon within the sky was grey But glowed a smile down on me A poetess, though child may Feel not nearly so lonely A gift was given; to be taught What glorious wonders had I seen not Though I grow old, I will not lie When in a dark depressive mood, Within my heart appears the sky Forget not what was understood Again, my soul and heart stand still An upwards gaze to heaven's will

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Date: 9/22/2022 1:55:00 AM
A great combination of ideas intermixed with stupendous imagery. Best for a win.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:27:00 PM
Thank you, Victor, your visit and kind words mean so much to me you are very encouraging :) I hope you are having a wonderful week!
Date: 9/21/2022 8:17:00 PM
A beautiful poem my friend. Enjoyed reading <3 Best of luck in the contest! =) ~Anna Kaianah
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Anna! Your visit and kind words encourage me so very much :) I hope you are having a blessed week my sweet young friend :) <3
Date: 9/21/2022 10:40:00 AM
Just gorgeous, BJ, especially the first stanza. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon, I am so incredibly honored by your Fave, as well as your visit and very uplifting comment :) I hope you are having a blessed week :)
Date: 9/21/2022 5:01:00 AM
Superbly done, BJ. A splendid blend of imagery and emotions. Best to you.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay your visits and comments always encourage me so very much:) I hope you're having a wonderful day my friend! <3
Date: 9/21/2022 5:01:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I like the faith-based choice of a way to write this one. Thank you for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:21:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, your visits and comments always encourage me :) I hope you're having a blessed day my friend <3. :)
Date: 9/20/2022 10:21:00 PM
Amazing poetry here i read. Good luck in contest...Harry
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Harry, you encourage me :) I appreciate your visit and comment so very much. :)
Date: 9/20/2022 8:27:00 PM
Another level! Superb write, Legros!
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 9/22/2022 1:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Unseeking Seeker, you encourage me so much with your words :)

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