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I Waited Long

I waited long among the dew of morning grass and day anew, arising in the place we played where hasty promises were made; our tender hearts to each we threw. So we could naive vows renew; and others from our minds eschew; among dawn's chorus, here I stayed. I waited long. Soft downy skin, a dress askew I can recall each inch of you places where our fingers strayed. Last eve with deadly fire, we played then panting breath, a sweet adieu; I waited long.

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Date: 5/8/2022 6:25:00 PM
Quite a paean to passion, Terry. Precious penning, Gershon
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/9/2022 1:12:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon; not my usual style, but I did enjoy the Rondeau format; I may revisit it.
Date: 5/7/2022 12:03:00 PM
Wow! A splendid Rondeau, Terry. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Terry Miller
Date: 5/9/2022 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, Milton. I am always pleased when you have read and commented on my efforts.

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