Steven Mitchell Poet Free verse

I Used To Love Her Once

i used to love her once
hooked besotted for months
i gave her my all
despite her being 6foot tall
my head only up to her bumps

wed go to bed early
at the peak of our love
but some times this led to some trouble
for when id assume the position
for her aquisition
id ticlke her chest with my stubble

i used to love her once
i gave her my all 
despite her being 6 foot tall
my head only up to her bumps

she got pretty aggrieved with the love she recieved
and finally filed for divorce
she had just the one reason
to justify her love treason
size it does matter of course

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David Fisher September 18, 2013 at 6:17 PM Great finish to a fun write. I haven't been on the soup and just got a look, and you sized it up nicely.

Christine Phillips July 26, 2013 at 3:16 AM I like this poem. It is serious but entertaining. Very nice. Steven Mitchell July 26, 2013 at 5:19 PM fortunatley its just fiction thank god , glad you like it thanks

Barbara Gorelick July 25, 2013 at 11:07 PM Soup mail...BG Steven Mitchell July 26, 2013 at 5:17 PM sorry B i havnt given in to your challenge ive been too busy but i get crackin tommorow an see what we can come up with ok doll talk soon

David Fisher July 24, 2013 at 5:20 PM Another good write. Maybe add on something like- But now we have a ball coz I'm standing on a stump. Steven Mitchell July 24, 2013 at 5:23 PM ha ha ha crackin up with that in my head , nice one David

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2013 at 3:29 PM I hope to see Barbara's verse added in. She says she was gonna do you one? If i had time I'd give it a try. Sure enjoyed this. It is very clever.

Barbara Gorelick July 24, 2013 at 11:42 AM Good one! Ill work on a verse for you..lol. Maybe you could write about taking growth hormone to catch up...BG Steven Mitchell July 24, 2013 at 4:57 PM well your obliged now ya cheeky mare,,,,