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I Used To Love Her Once

i used to love her once hooked besotted for months i gave her my all despite her being 6foot tall my head only up to her bumps wed go to bed early at the peak of our love but some times this led to some trouble for when id assume the position for her aquisition id ticlke her chest with my stubble i used to love her once i gave her my all despite her being 6 foot tall my head only up to her bumps she got pretty aggrieved with the love she recieved and finally filed for divorce she had just the one reason to justify her love treason size it does matter of course

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/18/2013 6:17:00 PM
Great finish to a fun write. I haven't been on the soup and just got a look, and you sized it up nicely.
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:16:00 AM
I like this poem. It is serious but entertaining. Very nice.
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Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/26/2013 5:19:00 PM
fortunatley its just fiction thank god , glad you like it thanks
Date: 7/25/2013 11:07:00 PM
Soup mail...BG
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Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/26/2013 5:17:00 PM
sorry B i havnt given in to your challenge ive been too busy but i get crackin tommorow an see what we can come up with ok doll talk soon
Date: 7/24/2013 5:20:00 PM
Another good write. Maybe add on something like- But now we have a ball coz I'm standing on a stump.
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Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/24/2013 5:23:00 PM
ha ha ha crackin up with that in my head , nice one David
Date: 7/24/2013 3:29:00 PM
I hope to see Barbara's verse added in. She says she was gonna do you one? If i had time I'd give it a try. Sure enjoyed this. It is very clever.
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Date: 7/24/2013 11:42:00 AM
Good one! Ill work on a verse for you..lol. Maybe you could write about taking growth hormone to catch up...BG
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Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/24/2013 4:57:00 PM
well your obliged now ya cheeky mare,,,,

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