I Try Not To Read

I try not to read
other people's stuff,
too much.
Cause when I do,
I'm left with
this disquieting feeling
that it's all been said,
and much better.
That's why I hate
that damned Bukowski
so much.
For days after
I am derivative
and imitative.
I can't live with him.
I can't live without him,
and I drive him out the door, 
and his overdue books are taken
back to the library and paid for
with a vengence.
But if I can just keep tromping
across this poetic veldt,
recklessly mixing metaphors
and crushing sentences underhoof
like some adolescent rhino,
I might, in my innocence
of what is proper,
find a clearing by a gentle pool,
where no one's been before,
and I will sink to my knees 
in the mud, 
drink deeply of waters
that have never been described,
breathe deeply the scent of flowers,
that no one knows,
and I will tell you about it,
and you will come
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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September 19, 2009 at 5:54 AM
"But if I can just keep tromping across this poetic veldt, recklessly mixing metaphors and crushing sentences underhoof like some adolescent rhino" wonderful lines...just remember everyone has a different take on things...it's your perspective that's different (the old elephant & the blind men story!) Light & Love
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