I Tip My Hat To Life

A rush of gentle breeze, the palm trees wave
Verdant flutters tickle my ears
                      A greeting as kind as a Key West morn

As shadows lace my corn straw hat
                                 I welcome another brilliant day

The warmth of early spring consoles
                                         My thoughts begin to drift
I’m carried away, no worries
                               I tip my hat to life

Illness and death seem far away
                                           I see only thriving bloom
A rainbow assortment, infused with grace

I walk the familiar path, sugared by Honeysuckle sweet
It comforts me, its composure pleases 
                                    It feels safe, it feels like home
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 2:54 AM
You have such a beautiful way of taking the reader with you in letting them feel what you feel Mike. I felt as if I were there in the pleasing calm surroundings. A marvelous poem! xxoo
Gentile Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Connie, I do appreciate your kind comments Happy Saturday xxoo
One Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 11:24 AM
A lovely poem my friend... So uplifting.
Gentile Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 12:24 PM
Thank you Silent One!! Happy Thursday!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:03 PM
Sounds pretty blissful, uplifting write indeed! Enjoyed, thank you Mike. Take care, xomo
Gentile Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:53 PM
Thanks so much Maureen, Stay safe, I appreciate your kind words xxoo
Pandit Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 3:58 PM
A wonderful uplifting write, Mike--enjoyed the happy tone of your poem.
Gentile Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 4:06 PM
Thanks Vijay, I needed a diversion !!! Have a great evening!
Cunningham Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 3:20 PM
It's in these dark times that we really appreciate life. Sounds like a lovely walk you took Mike. Tom
Gentile Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Thanks so much Tom !!
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