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I Thought It Was Tea

I thought it was tea
it tasted bitter, different, unknown
I started feeling...something
Everything was slowing down
everything everyone said seemed funny
their mouths moved to every syllable
and each hair on a face seemed more detailed
I watched my hands grow, fingers seemed to elongate
everyone was wearing clowns feet, big floppy shoes
time seemed to move in technicolor and stretch
in a corner, a couple was kissing
they melted into the wall
the wall melted into the floor
the floor melted away
leaving me on the edge of something, unseen
a light was spinning, coming closer and closer
it can't be the sun, it's growing
I scream
darkness, sweat, a cold wet towel
a soft voice, are you alright
I don't know
I just had some tea


3/8/18 contest Hallucination
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March 23, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Frederic - TWICE I was given drugs without my knowledge - acid once and then angel dust - and both experiences were horrific, and some of the worst memories of my life. I created my own problems later on with other substances, sadly, but I have NEVER liked anything that changed my perceptions or hindered my clarity of thought ... I can SO relate. Wonderful write, my friend, and congrats on your HM!
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:16 PM
SO awesome and SO sixties!!! I bet it will get a win.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 9:01 PM
LOL. LOVE it.
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 2:03 PM
this is imagination at its best with lovely images, frederick... my kind of TEA!..HUGGS
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 10:59 AM
I don't believe I'd have drank that. Great writing Frederic, you took us all on a ride...
Godwin Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:57 AM
You did an amusing, entertaining and vivid job with this write. I thoroughly enjoyed it and applaud it though I deny any knowledge of what it could be alluding to.. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Scars Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:41 AM
great poem dear Frederic, as always ;)-luloo
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March 8, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Wow, Frederick! You draw us right into the hallucination!
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