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I Think You Are the Cheap and Not Me ......

Showing me the expensive bangle on her wrist She asked, "Will you buy me something like this ? " If you do, you can take me out again What do you say ' Yes ' or ' No ' ? Looking at the bangle I knew it cost a lot To take her out for a hot date One day a bangle, another day a necklace Her needs will never end until my pocket is empty I managed to get a fake smile on my face I saw another fake smile on her crooked face I knew money is the only reason for this date Her eyes are not on my face but on the bulged wallet It won't last long and it's unhealthy I told to myself without thinking twice Somehow I happend to control myself I just said, " You get nothing when you come with me ". Her response was so quick,"You are so cheap " I had a hysteric laugh inside me I said loud to her , "I think you are the cheap and not me" ' "You know why? You come for something and not for Love " I am not looking for that kind of date It is easy to get and I don't need it She tried to change the topic, "I was just kidding you" I knew it is a lie and I put a full stop on that relationship.

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Date: 4/11/2009 3:40:00 PM
Hooray Jose !! Glad you didn't fall for that golddigger ... smile ... great writing here, very imaginative and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/11/2009 12:17:00 PM
I'd would have asked her if i could hit home plate and then went from there. why end a perfect relationship. but what you did was my second choice. jhl
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Date: 4/11/2009 7:25:00 AM
great poem, awesome poet. this piece is great keeep writing friend, and congrats on a well deserved feature... love Leke
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Date: 4/11/2009 6:47:00 AM
Amazing!! Exactly to the point.....Been there...actually ive called cheap for something i said and something i did so..it reminded me of that...nice one! keep up the good work.. Cheers!!
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:53:00 PM
Very nice! I love how poetry can express the rules of life as someone sees it. I especially enjoy it when it's a universal situation. With your poem not written in any established form, it actually flows better.
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:24:00 PM
Wisdom portrayed here. Very Nice Poem. Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:34:00 PM
Jose - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/7/2009 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, this is all too real, too many women, and men too, are all about what you can do for them and not about love. Is it too much to ask for someone to want you for you and not what you have? I'm beginning to wonder....Great write.........Aleera
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:15:00 PM
I want to express my sincere thanks to www.Poetrysoup.com and it's readers. I didn't write anything seriouse for last two years. It is really amazing to see the comments after a long period since the poems were originally written. Your encouragement gives me more inspiration. Read my other poems as well and I will try to read your poems. Take care.
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your featured write this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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