Notes About The Poem

I Think of You

You’re sleeping soundly, but I’m left on fire
Engulfed by flames of burning hot desire
I yearn for you, and in my heart’s an ache
For I must wait till sun kissed, you awake

I think of you, so full of every grace
You’re angel bearings show upon your face
The strength of virile man is in your stance
It makes the heart in me just want to dance

To know that you are mine is sweetest treat
 It makes me want each day anew to greet
The joy of losing self there in your eyes
Gives me the wings I need to take to skies

You give me strength; you give me love that’s true
My world is epic all because of you

For Gautami Phookan’s Contest- I think of You 
February 17, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 11:51 AM
What an incredible sonnet! You should be one of the reasons a world sonnet day should exist. Beautiful! So beautiful
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 11:50 AM
A belated congratulations on poem of the day. You Rock!
Phookan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:37 PM
Splendid..Wow, Eileen! I've read many of your prev works too.You've developed your own unique style of writing that's beautiful and sumptuous. I see you as a mature poet, you handle this subject with such subtlety and sureness. Loved this poem, you took my breath away with that last line! To my faves...
Manassian Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:52 PM
WOW! I'm so honored with your post, Gautami. Thanks ever so much. I don't know how I didn't enter this one...I must have been tired. I'm so glad you liked it.... :) Bless you. Hugs. I will submit to your contest with pleasure. Lovely avatar!
Phookan Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 12:39 PM
.. and do submit this in my next. with much love, gautami
Holmes Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 1:11 AM
Sex,passion and most important...love...thanks for this...Peter
Manassian Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Peter. Good to have you here.
Holmes Avatar
February 19, 2015 at 12:58 AM
Sex,passion and most important...love...thanks for this...Peter
Adel  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:31 PM
A warm romantic poem, congrats Eileen :)
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Thank you for the visit, Mohamed. I appreciate it...and the smile! :)
Meade Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Awesome!! All I got to say is -- it's about time POTD . . . You rock LO. 7 again.
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:37 PM
:) Thank you for believing in me, David. It means so much to me. Hugs to you from LO
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Beautiful poem, Eileen. Congratulations on it being selected Poem of the Day! Hugs, Sandra
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Thanks ever so much, Sandra. SO kind of you to visit. Blessings
Walker  Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on the poem of the day Eileen... Verlena
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:38 PM
Sweet of you to drop by, dear. Hugs
Romaine Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 2:19 PM
Hey Eileen, Congratulations on your poem being selected for POTD!! So passionately expressed and well deserving. Be Blessed, Neva
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Thanks ever so much for your lovely visit, Neva. I hope to get back to you soon. I'm about to get read to go to work and am just catching up with my post. Will visit soon. Hugs
Horn Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Wow. You have a love for words and love will never pass you by with all of those great poems of yours. How do you find a Poem of the Day for another day? Mine was on August 16th, 2014. Jim Horn [email protected]
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:40 PM
Thank you, James. Yes. I am very passionate for words. Thank you for your visit. It's nice to be POTD....Glad you were there too, and hope your poetry is featured soon. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 12:52 PM
This is really lovely and so nice to see it featured as Poem of the day. Congratulations!
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Thanks ever so much, Connie!!! :) I'm touched by your visit.
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Congrats on being featured today Eileen...hugs Tim
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Thanks, Tim. It was a lovely surprise. I'm very please and thankful to everyone who read my poem. Hugs
Eaton Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Beautiful and congratulations on POD. A 7 from me. Hugs Janet
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM
I'm honored, Janet. Thanks ever so much! Hugs
Roper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:00 AM
A 7, Eileen, beautiful desiring write. Blessings eve
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Thanks ever so much, sweet Eve! I'm blessed by your visit. Hugs
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Hooray, TPOD! It's well deserved with this beautiful sonnet...I love every line, but the second stanza WOW's me...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda :)
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I needed this boost today. I'm in bed feeling blue....So much to do....no energy. Brain freeze. This is a great boost to my flagging morale. Thank you for the kind words. I do send you hugs. You've brought a smile.
Cooper Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:41 AM
A passionate beautiful woman in deep love with her man. You show your soul to us again my dearest friend, yearning and joy coupled with a fierce and all consuming love. You are an amazingly complex wonderful woman. love Shane xxx
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:59 AM
Complex I am, Shane. I know that. I have my highs and lows...I'm passionately passionate....and given to extremes. You know me well. Thank you for your sweet visit and kind comments. :) Hugs
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 4:56 PM
I love this sonnet, Eileen!! I knew you would come up with something great for this contest...the strength of virile man is in your stance...that is an awesome line...best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:00 AM
Thanks, Rhonda....Sorry I'm late with my response. Thank you for visiting me twice. You are a sweetie pie. Bless you!!!
Callus Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 2:01 PM
What a lovely sonnet Eileen!! That first stanza is my favourite part....for that alone I give you a top rating! This is a winner! hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Your opinion carries weight with me, Paul....the last line of that first stanza is my favorite. It give me a bit of trouble at first. When you find the right working....heaven. Hugs
Relish Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 10:48 AM
the joy of losing self there in your eyes... beautiful lines Eileen... good luck for the contest... lov n hugs, nad! 7
Manassian Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 7:53 AM
The eyes mesmerize, Nadiya. They say so much. Thank you for your kind comment. Hugs
Meade Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Wow!! You can wake me anytime . . . nicely done LO. Another fav, 7 for me . . . light and love always.
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:37 AM
;) Wouldn't that be a nice way to wake up? Thanks for the visit, David. I'm still after you to post something new. Get cracking or I'll get cracking with my whip! ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 8:35 AM
The picture makes me think of Japanese warrior comics. You allways come up with the most amazing pictures to accompany your artistry. Your poem has matched the intensity of this passionate embrace.
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Finding the pics is half the joy for me, Richard....I infuse myself in every picture that I find....It depicts what I feel and "see". Thanks for visiting me though you are away! Hugs :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 5:32 AM
The epitome of romanticism for the one we love! Absolutely divine! A seven and good luck dear, Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Thank you, my dear sweet poet. I hope all is fine with you. Your visit is a welcome treat. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 4:11 AM
- Really beautiful, dear Eileen - I wish you best of luck in the contest .... and a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, Sunshine!!! We could use you here in Lebanon. It's been raining all week! Hugs!
Bordner Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 3:40 AM
Epic is love that makes a heart rise, disbelief and sorrow it defies...you share the truth of love herein, that hearts combined brave the toughest clime...so beautifully quilled you are Eileen...J.A.B.
Manassian Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Life is mundane and ordinary....epic is above and beyond...and the sweetest call. :) The poems I've written for your contests? They drew the epic from me, Justin. You symbolize epic in your writes. :) Thank you for the visit.
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