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You’re sleeping soundly, but I’m left on fire
Engulfed by flames of burning hot desire
I yearn for you, and in my heart’s an ache
For I must wait till sun kissed, you awake

I think of you, so full of every grace
You’re angel bearings show upon your face
The strength of virile man is in your stance
It makes the heart in me just want to dance

To know that you are mine is sweetest treat
 It makes me want each day anew to greet
The joy of losing self there in your eyes
Gives me the wings I need to take to skies

You give me strength; you give me love that’s true
My world is epic all because of you

For Gautami Phookan’s Contest- I think of You 
February 17, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/21/2016 11:51:00 AM
What an incredible sonnet! You should be one of the reasons a world sonnet day should exist. Beautiful! So beautiful
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:50:00 AM
A belated congratulations on poem of the day. You Rock!
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Date: 2/22/2015 12:37:00 PM
Splendid..Wow, Eileen! I've read many of your prev works too.You've developed your own unique style of writing that's beautiful and sumptuous. I see you as a mature poet, you handle this subject with such subtlety and sureness. Loved this poem, you took my breath away with that last line! To my faves...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2015 2:52:00 PM
WOW! I'm so honored with your post, Gautami. Thanks ever so much. I don't know how I didn't enter this one...I must have been tired. I'm so glad you liked it.... :) Bless you. Hugs. I will submit to your contest with pleasure. Lovely avatar!
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Gautami Phookan
Date: 2/22/2015 12:39:00 PM
.. and do submit this in my next. with much love, gautami
Date: 2/19/2015 1:11:00 AM
Sex,passion and most important...love...thanks for this...Peter
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/19/2015 7:00:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Peter. Good to have you here.
Date: 2/19/2015 12:58:00 AM
Sex,passion and most important...love...thanks for this...Peter
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Date: 2/18/2015 8:31:00 PM
A warm romantic poem, congrats Eileen :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:37:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, Mohamed. I appreciate it...and the smile! :)
Date: 2/18/2015 8:07:00 PM
Awesome!! All I got to say is -- it's about time POTD . . . You rock LO. 7 again.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:37:00 PM
:) Thank you for believing in me, David. It means so much to me. Hugs to you from LO
Date: 2/18/2015 5:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Eileen. Congratulations on it being selected Poem of the Day! Hugs, Sandra
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:38:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Sandra. SO kind of you to visit. Blessings
Date: 2/18/2015 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the poem of the day Eileen... Verlena
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:38:00 PM
Sweet of you to drop by, dear. Hugs
Date: 2/18/2015 2:19:00 PM
Hey Eileen, Congratulations on your poem being selected for POTD!! So passionately expressed and well deserving. Be Blessed, Neva
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:39:00 PM
Thanks ever so much for your lovely visit, Neva. I hope to get back to you soon. I'm about to get read to go to work and am just catching up with my post. Will visit soon. Hugs
Date: 2/18/2015 1:33:00 PM
Wow. You have a love for words and love will never pass you by with all of those great poems of yours. How do you find a Poem of the Day for another day? Mine was on August 16th, 2014. Jim Horn jthorn5656@gmail.com
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, James. Yes. I am very passionate for words. Thank you for your visit. It's nice to be POTD....Glad you were there too, and hope your poetry is featured soon. :)
Date: 2/18/2015 12:52:00 PM
This is really lovely and so nice to see it featured as Poem of the day. Congratulations!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, Connie!!! :) I'm touched by your visit.
Date: 2/18/2015 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on being featured today Eileen...hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Tim. It was a lovely surprise. I'm very please and thankful to everyone who read my poem. Hugs
Date: 2/18/2015 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful and congratulations on POD. A 7 from me. Hugs Janet
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:42:00 PM
I'm honored, Janet. Thanks ever so much! Hugs
Date: 2/18/2015 9:00:00 AM
A 7, Eileen, beautiful desiring write. Blessings eve
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 10:43:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, sweet Eve! I'm blessed by your visit. Hugs
Date: 2/18/2015 7:49:00 AM
Hooray, TPOD! It's well deserved with this beautiful sonnet...I love every line, but the second stanza WOW's me...congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I needed this boost today. I'm in bed feeling blue....So much to do....no energy. Brain freeze. This is a great boost to my flagging morale. Thank you for the kind words. I do send you hugs. You've brought a smile.
Date: 2/18/2015 4:41:00 AM
A passionate beautiful woman in deep love with her man. You show your soul to us again my dearest friend, yearning and joy coupled with a fierce and all consuming love. You are an amazingly complex wonderful woman. love Shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 7:59:00 AM
Complex I am, Shane. I know that. I have my highs and lows...I'm passionately passionate....and given to extremes. You know me well. Thank you for your sweet visit and kind comments. :) Hugs
Date: 2/17/2015 4:56:00 PM
I love this sonnet, Eileen!! I knew you would come up with something great for this contest...the strength of virile man is in your stance...that is an awesome line...best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Rhonda....Sorry I'm late with my response. Thank you for visiting me twice. You are a sweetie pie. Bless you!!!
Date: 2/17/2015 2:01:00 PM
What a lovely sonnet Eileen!! That first stanza is my favourite part....for that alone I give you a top rating! This is a winner! hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 8:02:00 AM
Your opinion carries weight with me, Paul....the last line of that first stanza is my favorite. It give me a bit of trouble at first. When you find the right working....heaven. Hugs
Date: 2/17/2015 10:48:00 AM
the joy of losing self there in your eyes... beautiful lines Eileen... good luck for the contest... lov n hugs, nad! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/18/2015 7:53:00 AM
The eyes mesmerize, Nadiya. They say so much. Thank you for your kind comment. Hugs
Date: 2/17/2015 9:04:00 AM
Wow!! You can wake me anytime . . . nicely done LO. Another fav, 7 for me . . . light and love always.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2015 9:37:00 AM
;) Wouldn't that be a nice way to wake up? Thanks for the visit, David. I'm still after you to post something new. Get cracking or I'll get cracking with my whip! ;)
Date: 2/17/2015 8:35:00 AM
The picture makes me think of Japanese warrior comics. You allways come up with the most amazing pictures to accompany your artistry. Your poem has matched the intensity of this passionate embrace.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2015 9:38:00 AM
Finding the pics is half the joy for me, Richard....I infuse myself in every picture that I find....It depicts what I feel and "see". Thanks for visiting me though you are away! Hugs :)
Date: 2/17/2015 5:32:00 AM
The epitome of romanticism for the one we love! Absolutely divine! A seven and good luck dear, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, my dear sweet poet. I hope all is fine with you. Your visit is a welcome treat. Hugs
Date: 2/17/2015 4:11:00 AM
- Really beautiful, dear Eileen - I wish you best of luck in the contest .... and a lovely day! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine!!! We could use you here in Lebanon. It's been raining all week! Hugs!
Date: 2/17/2015 3:40:00 AM
Epic is love that makes a heart rise, disbelief and sorrow it defies...you share the truth of love herein, that hearts combined brave the toughest clime...so beautifully quilled you are Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/17/2015 9:41:00 AM
Life is mundane and ordinary....epic is above and beyond...and the sweetest call. :) The poems I've written for your contests? They drew the epic from me, Justin. You symbolize epic in your writes. :) Thank you for the visit.
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