Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

I Think About You

I think about you now and then. Those eyes I’d never see again!
I wonder if you’re still alive though decades later I still thrive.
In good health would I find you, dear? Through time, I never had you near.

In poetry I write for you. The way you made me feel comes through.
If I had one wish, I’d implore that I could touch your face once more.

Aug. 24, 2022
for Line Gauthier's Bite Size Contest No.60 Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier October 24, 2022 at 8:47 AM Gave me shivers ~ lovely, Andrea ~

Michael Tor September 26, 2022 at 8:04 AM A very special person who touched your heart Andrea that till this day it beats in his memory to always be a long lost love. Wonderfully written. Be blessed...

Bill Baker September 2, 2022 at 3:23 PM An endearing poem, Andrea. The mind can create the most interesting senarios if we let it. What might have been ... What could be ... all alluring feelings. Have a great weekend! Bill

Francis J Grasso August 31, 2022 at 5:14 PM I hear Andy Williams' "Sweet Memories" when I read this, Andrea. Very nice. ...Fran

Gary Radice August 26, 2022 at 6:18 AM Unrequited love? Lost love? A state of mind? Incomplete feelings? Pure longing? Simply wondering? The answers aren't that important, I just love how your poem made me ponder the questions. Cheers - Gary Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2022 at 8:17 AM Soupmail

Mike Bayles August 25, 2022 at 9:08 PM This is very nice, Andrea, with a touch of longing. It is an intriguing poem.

Weston Gregory August 25, 2022 at 8:00 PM It is always nice imaging the meet up of a long absent mentor, the thought if they would be proud of you. Nice write.

Harry Horsman August 25, 2022 at 5:15 PM Intriguing poem, Andrea, and lovely, There are so many, wishing to fill that void, from this side of your muse.....

Andy Chunn August 25, 2022 at 7:51 AM Lost love always remains, whether as a major sorrow or just fond recollection. Beautifully written, this captures the feeling of loss and wonder.

Vijay Pandit August 25, 2022 at 4:41 AM Lovingly reminiscing in past. Best to you, Andrea.

Valsa George August 24, 2022 at 8:36 PM Beautifully written, dear Andrea ! Love grows stronger in absence ! Though years have slipped by, the sweet image is etched in your heart !

Joseph May August 24, 2022 at 3:56 PM Thoughts of a loved one stay in the heart, Wonderful write Andrea

Eve Roper August 24, 2022 at 2:26 PM To hold on to those memories for so long. Blessings friend

Rico Leffanta August 24, 2022 at 10:46 AM Enjoyed, but when I see how some actresses have aged, it may be best to let sleeping dogs lie (like Trump?) Aloha! Rico Leffanta August 25, 2022 at 11:19 AM I disagree! Faces are like monuments, reflecting those who have lived an happy life as well as those who have lived a miserable life. Beauty and physical assets in youth may not lead to an happy life! Aloha! Andrea Dietrich August 24, 2022 at 1:50 PM it's not in looks. It's all about feelings.

Victor Buhagiar August 24, 2022 at 8:29 AM Quite romantic though lover is lost. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick August 24, 2022 at 6:42 AM Ahhh!! Romantic contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Very good rhythm, rhyme and flow. Sara