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I, the Intruder

In Italy, I walked along Pompeii: an eeriness exudes each house and street  (although those crumbling structures had been fine, lived in and loved by those who'd died that day); the ground still trodden by so many feet... like mine. I wondered, 'Is it right to visit here, to peer in places where they'd sleep and dine?' The people felt so close as though we'd meet; what would they think of me, a sightseer? Their shrine! written 20th October for Sara's curtal sonnet contest

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Date: 11/22/2020 5:55:00 PM
your work here was excellent. One of my favorites on the winner list. Congrats, Jack.
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Date: 11/21/2020 2:15:00 AM
I really liked this one. Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara.
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Date: 10/24/2020 7:56:00 AM
What an awful happening and so quick, nowhere to hide, cruel, yet they died all together as a family, nature can be devastating. Look at fires, Tsunamis, tidal waves, hurricanes Tornadoes - Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/22/2020 6:19:00 PM
this is simply splendid! gotta try this form.
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Date: 10/22/2020 2:13:00 PM
This is beautiful, Jack, and shows the sensitive nature of the poet. I've visited such ruins, and the sense of intrusion does come to mind, but at the same time it is wonderful to somehow be able to travel so far back in time. Regards // pau
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Date: 10/21/2020 8:29:00 AM
Lovely writing... Wishing you a win. God bless you
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Date: 10/20/2020 3:49:00 PM
I've not been, but it must be pretty eerie thinking how quickly life must have been snuffed out for the Pompeiians. Well done Jack, and good luck in Sara's contest ~ John
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Date: 10/20/2020 12:52:00 PM
thought provoking piece Jack, I went to Pompeii a few years ago it was on my bucket list, i actually preferred Herculaneum which was far better preserved but gets less visitors:-) hugs jan xx
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