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I swear to tell the truth

The whole truth and nothing but the fu(king truth That laws, and math, only help solve local temporary problems, All of which fall way short on the infinite needs scale were we rely on estimates, theories, and other manmade truths   Still here we are, alone on a goldilocks planet All 8 billion of us milling around, living our lives guaranteed nothing other than this moment and whatever came before To think otherwise would be presumptuously human   As for choice is there really any other than try feed ourselves and sate the instinct to survive and thrive We are a civilisation built on disparate societal values and creeds Each day is an imperceptible handover from one generation to the next, with no guarantee they’ll do a better job   But the real problem is not truth, It’s why! Why anything at all, Why life Why the fu(k am I asking these questions I’m apostate, No! I have little faith, No! I am honest, No! A nihilist, No It’s because I have a sentient, curious, unapologetic mind that compels me to ask why! Sometimes I think i’d be better off a sponge floating in crystal clear turquoise balmy oceans Soaking up oblivious unintelligible surroundings Indifferent to mortality and the universe, popping off a few buds every once in a while, or whatever sponges brainlessly do to further their species Such basic life is so very tempting but just doesn’t sit right Never to experience love however fleeting, Never to endure pain However crushing, Never to feel like throwing in the towel, Even if just to mop blood off the floor like a sponge See, I’ve had moments unimaginably beautiful, Alongside unconscionably awful ones, Moments so real they can’t have been synthesised by any stretch of any imagination I believe a God or the universe created me as a vessel of interpretation to perceive itself from my unique perspective Well not unique per se, more a personalised handicapped view I am nothing and everything in the grand scheme of things No more! No less! One that uses swear words language you may not like, yet clearly understand The weirdest part is not the feeling I’ve written this fu(ked up poem in previous carnations It’s my swearing just seems to be getting worse By David Kavanagh

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Date: 3/16/2025 5:41:00 PM
David, your poem cleverly asks existential questions. Our understanding of what this is all about seems moot. At least you're trying to have us consider what we're here for. Take care!! Smiles!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/17/2025 5:51:00 AM
Thanks Duke, existentialism is certainly pretty evident in my posts, I really enjoy tackling the big questions even if I just end up swearing at the trickle of answers, still I have found a few of them reasonable if not totally logical, cheers David
Date: 3/11/2025 11:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "I swear to tell the truth" write. Learning you tell the whole truth. Life comes with many questions but with few answers. That is where "Why" come in. Have a fun day as you write away..........
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/11/2025 3:08:00 PM
You’re not wrong Paula, but doesn’t mean I’m right, perspective is the name of the game, “Why” is the unknown quantity, Still I’ve got a hunch “Why” I’m swearing so much in this poem, but I definitely wouldn’t swear on it! Thanks for stopping by, Cheers David
Date: 3/8/2025 6:51:00 PM
I loved every moment of reading this. The trip my brain took with my head in tow and out squeezed a tear a lump in my throat and a lasting grin. xomo
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Date: 3/9/2025 1:26:00 AM
Thank you Super Mo, you really shouldn’t encourage me, but I’m delighted you do lol! I’m an existentialist at heart with a personalised handicapped view, hoping all those emotions you expressed especially that lasting grin stay with you for at least this lifetime, cheers David
Date: 3/8/2025 3:41:00 PM
Penetrating and powerfully dramatic, and yet I'm finding humor, lots of it, thanks for the laughs "popping off a few buds every once in a while, or whatever sponges brainlessly do to further their species" that's what I meant. I don't recognize you a stranger, not often in your vocabulary are you like this. You're confident and are fearless. Life has many choices, phases, no need to stay stagnant. Stay nothing but true to yourself and nothing but the truth ~ Intriguing, Cheers
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Date: 3/9/2025 8:51:00 AM
Exactly, I move around in different circles, it's crucial to have an open mind! :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/9/2025 1:13:00 AM
Heya Anaya, yes there is dark humour throughout this poem, as I could not have written it without same! I particularly liked the sponge line you mentioned, maybe it’s the most intelligent considering they have no brain :) Thanks so much for your wise input (no need to stay stagnant) just stay true to ourselves, and keep an open mind, cheers David
Date: 3/8/2025 12:27:00 PM
I thought seeing your name in the new poems list was a mirage for a moment. Powerful write David and with the heart of you stamped all over it. Knowing seems to me some fleeting millisecond that we spend too much time trying to grasp and is ever changing. I almost felt onto something before looking at the moons glow but lost the thought instantaneously. Maybe poetry can one day capture & bottle that one thought that makes sense of it all. But until then I'm happy to vote for you haha I mean fave
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Date: 3/8/2025 2:25:00 PM
I'm convinced I've been at the rally in a previous life haha
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2025 2:23:00 PM
That’s the best kind of praise Dilly, knowing this poem I’ve written countless times before in previous lives, is still refreshing lol!
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Date: 3/8/2025 1:58:00 PM
I've been sleepy all day but feel woken up and revived (the affect of hearing a good speech). My daughter kept asking me why I was smiling at my phone haha. Like a breath of fresh air through the brain cells :)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2025 1:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Dilly, A mirage, I like that image, says a lot too :), oh! and that millisecond you mentioned was the present, now the past (doesn’t last long does it) yes this is about how much sense I make of it all, without any biases or influences whatsoever, well except maybe swearing, anyway who ever said that swearing is not part of the bigger picture :) I’m effing delighted with your fave, cheers David
Date: 3/8/2025 12:16:00 PM
Keep questioning anything you choose, David. If you didn't, you would be one of the 8 billion who don't have answers but are too afraid to ask questions. Be a sponge but take care where you go floating. There are too many toxic places and people that will weigh you down until you drown in their deep waters. Stay buoyant.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2025 2:04:00 PM
I know only too well that confrontation must sometimes be met head on :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2025 1:51:00 PM
So have roaches, but I'm so glad you didn't bring them up! I don't like being pushed around and avoid confrontation when I can, but you know...
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2025 1:37:00 PM
In truth the sponge turned out to be the star of the show Lin, those critters have been around for at least half a billion years, sometimes we must swim against the perceived current otherwise we grow weak and get pushed around ;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/8/2025 1:09:00 PM
It takes a strong swimmer to go against the current. You can handle the tide, the waves, and the BS that floats in the water. A sponge was a better choice... good for soaking up tidbits of info you think is worth keeping. There's nothing interesting about an amoeba. Besides, a sponge gave me more of an opportunity to comment about 'things'. ;-)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2025 12:39:00 PM
Heya Lin It’s what I do by design or default, keep questioning everything, not sure why I decided on a sponge, when an amoeba would have sufficed, oh I’m well past letting people try drag me down with them, I’ll keep treading water and go slightly against the flow:) cheers David

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