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Unrhymed quatrains three groups walking from the cross roads
Crying seagulls haunting over sea waves chant 
As they moan and groan whispers churn eloquently 
Carrying an echo to the heart bound sounding magic 
oasis of my desert blows with a murmuring voice music spells 

As footprints always remain solid treading upon deep sands 
An imprint etched inside cavern walls once sewn marks your spot 
 Churning emotions playing with feelings grow with pure tenderness 
we will forever walk together hands joined in freedom's name 

As one heart flies uniting deeply forgetmenots dance wildly 
Warm waves upon summer's breeze strike a tune rejoicing bells ring 
Turning tides breathless light filled with sweet fragrance opens up 
Gates of eternity when the arrow of Cupid struck home eternally grateful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/22/2016 12:14:00 AM
Magical ! You definitely know how to express yourself... Very romantic and captivating.. Cheers. ~Red~
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Date: 5/21/2016 11:31:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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