I Surrender To You My Weakness
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Unrhymed quatrains three groups walking from the cross roads
Crying seagulls haunting over sea waves chant
As they moan and groan whispers churn eloquently
Carrying an echo to the heart bound sounding magic
oasis of my desert blows with a murmuring voice music spells
As footprints always remain solid treading upon deep sands
An imprint etched inside cavern walls once sewn marks your spot
Churning emotions playing with feelings grow with pure tenderness
we will forever walk together hands joined in freedom's name
As one heart flies uniting deeply forgetmenots dance wildly
Warm waves upon summer's breeze strike a tune rejoicing bells ring
Turning tides breathless light filled with sweet fragrance opens up
Gates of eternity when the arrow of Cupid struck home eternally grateful
Copyright © Liam Mcdaid | Year Posted 2016
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