Get Your Premium Membership

I Surrender

Under the blood moon beneath a lunar eclipse darkness has a brilliant light; When teasing becomes tangible heartbeats steal the night.. Lost my heart as we fell to the ground, I give you a whimper my voice found.. Your eyes said ‘Arch for me.’ with a very slow blink; The emotion inside was no longer dormant; Destiny now awakened… I give you a whimper my voice found Lost my heart as we fell to the ground.. Tying knots in my stomach then not letting me get a release; Behave yourself and give in. Don’t parade yourself around, a teasing angel on top of me… Caught up in what could be forever, with a whimper I surrender..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/29/2023 1:17:00 PM
Pretty racy stuff, Melani. You need to be careful. You're going to give an old person a heart attack:)
Login to Reply
Udaeta Avatar
Melani Udaeta
Date: 11/29/2023 1:33:00 PM
Mission accomplished :) Thank you. Blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs