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I Stand Before a Piece of Stone

You took your life and left mine behind It was before God's own time I stand before a piece of stone Etched in memory is your name Feeling numb, how long will this remain? I stand before a piece of stone I see others that have come and gone The flowers galore represent their song I stand before a piece of stone You traded your life to go to heaven If I had known your pain was so laden ~ Mom now stands before a piece of stone ©Holly P. Moore November 2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2012 8:25:00 AM

Holly, this one is heart breaking. Sure hope it is not true. I think ghazal is a really good idea for this message.

Carma Sanderson

Date: 11/28/2012 3:36:00 PM

Very intense write here holly, I stand here in giving A prayer, god bless those who have come and gone, for you are always with in my heart, but deeper with in my soul and never forgotten, for I knw that god will keep you safe in his kingdom... Amen love always Carma

David Williams

Date: 11/28/2012 8:14:00 AM

Holly good refrain, well done...David