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I Smile As I See This Beauty Over Me

what makes me happy is just laying laying on an open field and feeling free as i see the birds above me spread their wings and fly right over me what makes me smile are the crickets just hearing them sing their extravagant songs and how with them its never wrong so i can just sing along and close my eyes and imagine me flying flying so high no one can touch me no one can hurt me no one can see me and escape all my troubles just by observing natures unpredictable ways i like to run out in the poring rain and swirl around, as i look up to see bright stars shining over me which leave me speechless!

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Date: 12/20/2011 12:59:00 PM
"laying on an open field and feeling free" Yes I do that sometimes, Cool... Congrats on your worthy poem win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/20/2011 1:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love it x
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Date: 12/19/2011 9:21:00 PM
A beautiful picture, Aleksandra. Congrats on your win. Merry Christmas. Kim
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:15:00 PM
Not quite speechless. You said it very well. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/19/2011 3:58:00 PM
this is very nice and you being happy by these simple beauties of nature. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/19/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "Being Happy" contest Aleksandra. I have enjoyed sponsoring contests this year and hope to continue doing it in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2011 1:16:00 PM
I am speechless - this is beautiful!!!
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