I Slowly Fade

Honored by her presents ...
Astounded by her beauty ...
Soothed by her grace ...  
But sadly she is gone, and
without her I slowly fade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 7:29 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:31 PM
Sad and heartfelt, Daniel. Congratulations on your winning poem
Quigley Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Congratulations on your win Daniel. Nicely written
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Daniel congrats on your win, hope this is not true life for you..David
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's sponsored contest Daniel. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 10:00 AM
CONGATS DANIEL ON 3RD PLACE WIN LUV..
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 8:01 PM
Awesome Tanka!!congratulations on your win!!!=====Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Daniel, Wonderful idea in Tanka. a superb win, worthy of the glory. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
Quigley Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Well said Daniel. Congratulations
Gorelick Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Wow! short but so meaningful..congrats on your win. BG
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Brian, Daniel
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