Sunlite Wanter Poet Romanticism

I Simply Love You

I Simply Love You

In the pastel dawn
	I love You.
In the red hot of noonday
	I love You.
At the green summer teatime
	I love You.
When sunset’s brilliant jewels fade to twilight
	I love You.
In evening’s deep blue and diamond stars
	I love You.
As I close my eyes to black of black,
	I love You.
And ‘til dawn to dawn, and forever dawns,
	I love You.

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Line Gauthier November 6, 2017 at 9:11 PM Truly adorable.

Sunlite Wanter August 20, 2017 at 6:19 PM Thank you, Faraz, for going back in time and commenting on this poem!

Faraz Ajmal August 20, 2017 at 10:09 AM Such a beautiful written poem about love, I really like the way you ve expressed your feelings in this way that no matter what happens you ll love him/her, a really beautiful write Sunlite Wanter August 20, 2017 at 7:03 PM My reply to you ended up in the wrong place. I do so appreciate your going back a few months and commenting on this poem.

Bawa Talwar July 3, 2017 at 9:50 PM A very unique love poem no demands are made just pure love expressed Very nice

James Edward Lee Sr. June 18, 2017 at 5:20 PM Beautiful! Can't go wrong with a classic thought. Make a great duet song between a man and a woman (ahh miss those duets wither they're gospel, country, R & B) No one sings to (man and women) each other any more. Love is a verb, it's action and if one sincerely does just a couple of the aforementioned verse of your poem be less divorces for real... Wordingly yours--James Edward Lee Sr.

Robert Lindley May 1, 2017 at 5:36 AM Wondrously deep love vows and gleaming light from- " evening’s deep blue and diamond stars"! A7

Curtis Johnson April 10, 2017 at 10:34 PM Very endearing my friend. God bless.

Anil Deo April 8, 2017 at 7:02 PM Such sweetness with no soppy surprises; just LOVE-ly. Please accept SEVEN from a new kid on the block. Shalom/Blessings PS. I endorse what Freddie says, below my comment (actually his IS before mine) Sunlite Wanter April 9, 2017 at 12:10 PM Oh, yes, Anil, I'll surely accept that SEVEN! Thank you for that very, nice comment. Shalom/Blessings to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr. April 6, 2017 at 7:12 PM I was won over w/the first I love you, Sunlite. Gotta love a poem w/that many I love yous. Beautiful simplicity, beautiful poem. Love and smiles. Sunlite Wanter April 7, 2017 at 10:06 AM Thank you, Freddie.

Barry Stebbings April 5, 2017 at 9:43 AM Very expressive and very tender, Sunlite. A lovely poem. // Barry Sunlite Wanter April 5, 2017 at 5:18 PM Thank you, Barry.

Chris Green April 4, 2017 at 5:55 AM Sigh, now this is a love poem my friend. This is the perfect poem to read anytime of the day. Love is even more wonderful when it flows from your pen. Sunlite Wanter April 4, 2017 at 6:30 PM What a nice thing to say - from the master!

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2017 at 8:14 PM so sweet and beautiful in its simplicity . Is it for Frank's contest? I sure hope he will realize mine is for the opposite gender though I did not say it inside the poem!! Sunlite Wanter April 4, 2017 at 6:32 PM No, it's not for any contest. Just to say love is simple. Thank you so much for commenting.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2017 at 7:55 PM - A lovely and sweet poem, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sunlite Wanter April 11, 2017 at 9:33 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your input.

Lewis Raynes April 3, 2017 at 7:17 PM forever dawns... great write Sunlite.