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I Simply Love You

I Simply Love You In the pastel dawn I love You. In the red hot of noonday I love You. At the green summer teatime I love You. When sunset’s brilliant jewels fade to twilight I love You. In evening’s deep blue and diamond stars I love You. As I close my eyes to black of black, I love You. And ‘til dawn to dawn, and forever dawns, I love You.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/6/2017 9:11:00 PM

Truly adorable.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/20/2017 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Faraz, for going back in time and commenting on this poem!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/20/2017 10:09:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem about love, I really like the way you ve expressed your feelings in this way that no matter what happens you ll love him/her, a really beautiful write

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/20/2017 7:03:00 PM

My reply to you ended up in the wrong place. I do so appreciate your going back a few months and commenting on this poem.

Bawa Talwar

Date: 7/3/2017 9:50:00 PM

A very unique love poem no demands are made just pure love expressed Very nice

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/18/2017 5:20:00 PM

Beautiful! Can't go wrong with a classic thought. Make a great duet song between a man and a woman (ahh miss those duets wither they're gospel, country, R & B) No one sings to (man and women) each other any more. Love is a verb, it's action and if one sincerely does just a couple of the aforementioned verse of your poem be less divorces for real... Wordingly yours--James Edward Lee Sr.

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/1/2017 5:36:00 AM

Wondrously deep love vows and gleaming light from- " evening’s deep blue and diamond stars"! A7

Curtis Johnson

Date: 4/10/2017 10:34:00 PM

Very endearing my friend. God bless.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/8/2017 7:02:00 PM

Such sweetness with no soppy surprises; just LOVE-ly. Please accept SEVEN from a new kid on the block. Shalom/Blessings PS. I endorse what Freddie says, below my comment (actually his IS before mine)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/9/2017 12:10:00 PM

Oh, yes, Anil, I'll surely accept that SEVEN! Thank you for that very, nice comment. Shalom/Blessings to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/6/2017 7:12:00 PM

I was won over w/the first I love you, Sunlite. Gotta love a poem w/that many I love yous. Beautiful simplicity, beautiful poem. Love and smiles.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/7/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Freddie.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 4/5/2017 9:43:00 AM

Very expressive and very tender, Sunlite. A lovely poem. // Barry

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/5/2017 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Barry.

Chris Green

Date: 4/4/2017 5:55:00 AM

Sigh, now this is a love poem my friend. This is the perfect poem to read anytime of the day. Love is even more wonderful when it flows from your pen.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/4/2017 6:30:00 PM

What a nice thing to say - from the master!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:14:00 PM

so sweet and beautiful in its simplicity . Is it for Frank's contest? I sure hope he will realize mine is for the opposite gender though I did not say it inside the poem!!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/4/2017 6:32:00 PM

No, it's not for any contest. Just to say love is simple. Thank you so much for commenting.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2017 7:55:00 PM

- A lovely and sweet poem, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/11/2017 9:33:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate your input.

Lewis Raynes

Date: 4/3/2017 7:17:00 PM

forever dawns... great write Sunlite.