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I Should Not Have Looked

I was told, I should not look. That's all it took
inspirited to sounds and motion of birds.
My heart and sight fixed not to overlook
the experience of the Lord's melting Words.

I stared, unable to utter a sound,
at the radiance beauty of angels,
ruffling their feathers. They have gathered around
unfolding like flowers adoring the aisles.

A feeling of glorious warm wave of
joy engulfed me,  listening to His story.
My knees hit the ground looking up above,
stretched out my arms to receive His glory.

I was led by the Word and His nail scarred hands.
Heaven I found, succeeded in making me understand.

6/9/2017



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Makama Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
Gupta Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 7:24 AM
A brilliant sonnet ... Enjoyed reading ... peace and beauty ...
Roper Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Probir ~*
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:13 PM
Wow! Such a beautiful sonnet, Eve. I was overjoyed reading this spiritual poem. Written w/such grace. Gorgeous poetry. Love and peace always.
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thank you so very much, Freddie~*
Onclaud Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 2:02 PM
i like the heavenly mood of this grand work, eve... you uplift me.. huggs
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thank you so very much, Nette~*
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 2:00 PM
- I agree with Victor's comment - Really beautiful Eve - Good luck in the contest - "Wal-Marts" ? ... what does that mean ? ... never heard of it, Eve ... sorry :) - Thank you for your visit and comments on my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 1:19 PM
Thank you so very much, Sunshine~*
Boddie Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:37 PM
these are wise words you speak....i also Found The One you seeked....as they say, Jesus Is my rock....and For Him, i will never stop....trying to tell the entire world....Faith is worth more than diamonds and pearls....because Eternity only awaits....and i want it in my fate....Beautiful and encouraging as always ms roper....;)
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:44 PM
You are such a joy to hear from, Eric, your words are always so musical. Hugs dear friend ~*
Sands Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 10:04 AM
This is very nice Eve. :)
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:47 PM
Thank you, Heidi ~*
Sathasivam Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Excellent. Well penned Sonnet. All the best. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, Ravi ~*
Wolf Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 12:12 AM
I love how you have composed this, Eve! I adore the sonnet form! Best of luck to you
Roper Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, WW, ~*
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