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Clouds weep sending down vapour to mother earth trying to quench the fires of self destruction beheld, time lost to a cruel master igniting lines, fused in delusion Dreams cast forth in fervent storms ideals left, now an uncontrollable rage mountains moved, flattened by stupidity rivers ruined, overflown with blood and guts Tonight the lonely wolf howls at an empty moon a barren heart, tossed with a lust for greed beating down a trodden path, barely holding on where serpents slip on up through the grass Lay down the swords of battles gone awry Arise with the sparrows or alone we shall die Penned November 9 2016

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Date: 12/1/2017 2:51:00 PM
All I can say is Why? I do not know. I like this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 11/25/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congrats to you both on a very successful collaboration.
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:14:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration Seren and Tim! Congratulations to both of you having this poem honored for POTD!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/13/2017 5:32:00 PM
thank you Connie... Seren
Date: 11/13/2017 6:46:00 AM
Great collaboration about cruelty of death, Seren and Tim:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/13/2017 11:11:00 AM
Thank you Jo glad you enjoyed it....Seren
Date: 11/12/2017 8:11:00 AM
Great write Seren congratulations for POTD honors...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/12/2017 12:12:00 PM
this Charlie Tim and I did ok...Glad u liked it ...seren
Date: 11/11/2017 7:11:00 AM
Fantastic pen Seren. Congrats on potd! :) xomo
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/12/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thx Maureen . Tim and I enjoyed the write ....Seren
Date: 11/10/2017 8:38:00 PM
See I just knew this was a great write! Back to say congrats on POTD!!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 3:07:00 PM
Awesome write, Seren, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/10/2017 10:29:00 AM
Congrats!!! Seren...great entry my friend...well deserving of POTD!!...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/10/2017 8:53:00 AM
Great to see this as POTD
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:55:00 AM
Great message, Seren. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:44:00 AM
Great poem Seren and congrats on POTD! Hugs :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:58:00 AM
Wow, wow, such a powerful write my friend! You have delivered quite a punch with this amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, one that will remain in my mind for the rest of the day...Great Work!!
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Date: 11/9/2017 10:37:00 PM
This is amazing, both the opening line and the ending line are so powerful and filled with emotion, this also has a Gothic feel, a great collab and a fav!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2017 11:36:00 PM
Thank you my friend.....Seren
Date: 11/9/2017 2:41:00 PM
I agree with Tim, we need to lay down the swords :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2017 2:44:00 PM
Lol me too Heidi.....Seren
Date: 11/9/2017 2:38:00 PM
We need to lay down swords...I think it came out great
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/9/2017 2:41:00 PM
Yes it's great.. read email suggestion

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