I See You, Mary Lee


I am often underused and often underestimated 
a zing of a thing that often goes unheard, unseen  
ginger beer is a tonic unlike me it can't be grated 
a powerful root so astute, they bring from overseas 

The captain gives his orders but I see you Mary Lee
sitting in your cabin drinking tea and writing poetry    
flotsam and jetsam are marked on the ship, but me 
I float above the rest and so I heal you, Mary Lee  

The imp skipped merrily hugging his Jack Daniel 
the sun was too hot so he knocked on every door 
looking for a bed for him and his invisible Faneuil  
she opens it a peep and finds him on the floor  

Mr. Gargoyle tie askew in dire need of ginger root
"Oh Dear!" says Miss Lee, your drunk but very cute. 


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Date: 2/9/2024 12:41:00 AM
you have so much talent, won i want a drink, thanks for the enchanting poem
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Date: 2/8/2024 9:08:00 AM
Occasionally I got drunk, but it left an unpleasant aftertaste. Now I stick to fine red Italian or French wine and only one glass at lunchtime. A lovely smooth poem that made me smile. Hugs.
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Date: 2/8/2024 3:56:00 PM
an occasional drink does not make drunk but a happy heart, enjoy the vino and be happy my friend :)
Date: 2/7/2024 10:43:00 PM
Pleasantly humorous, I enjoyed this sonnet.
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Date: 2/8/2024 3:56:00 PM
A touch of humor a touch of real Hilda, thanks for reading :)
Date: 2/7/2024 10:47:00 AM
Hey Vienna my friend.. Your poem beautifully captures the essence of being undervalued and underestimated, likening itself to the often overlooked ginger root. The speaker expresses a sense of being unseen and unheard, much like the root that remains grated but powerful, astute, and brought from distant lands... i hope you do not feel like this..
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:35:00 PM
lol, there are days, but mostly I don't, you seem to read my mind and heart quite often, :)
Date: 2/7/2024 8:07:00 AM
Ah this is so creative and the way your words flow is beyond seamless dear sweet rose; i love the way youv delivered this in the most engaging manner, especially how you wrote “ i see you i feel you “ thats touching. And truly reached my soul too! As its not always one feels seen. “ i heal you “ love that too. I think in real life too you are healing. Your storytelling skills are something i admire as i am not very good with that: i hope i could oneday write tho. Pleasure reading your work.
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:35:00 PM
I love telling stories, lol, glad you enjoyed it Ink, :)
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