David Meade Poet Narrative

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I want to thank Eileen for agreeing to write with me – that took courage!!  I frustrated her during our write  . . . which began in 2014  . . . but her patience won the day!!  I have been immensely blessed by her passion – her passion for words and sentences, for getting it right.  I believe Eileen to be one of the best writer on the soup. Thank-you from the bottom of my heart!!

 

It’s up to you now – to read it or not . . . it is a passionate story between two people that finally get it right, forgiveness that flows from a deep love buried in bruised hearts, of hope that the future can keep two old lovers connected through life’s journey . . .

I See You Looking At Me - Collab With Em

I see you looking at me
There is an old pang in my chest
there where your hands used to  caress
where your lips loved to roam
there were you called your home
There is an old flutter now
What is that in your eyes?
Is it real or just a disguise
I see you looking at me
That way….

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No, it can’t be
And in that instant your memory consumes me
   A roaring fire lighting the room
   Shadows dancing on the walls 
   We are drunk on desire
    ……breathing you
    ……holding you
    ……caressing your breasts
    ……kissing your body
    …... tasting your love upon my tongue

Unbelievable . . . panic sizes me
Don’t look at her -- flee
But in that moment my shattered heart
Leaps with joy 
I see your eyes
    …. and I feel the earth 
    …. moan with delight
 
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I wish the world would go away
I turn away from your stare
Look down at my shaking hands
I'm breathless...overwhelmed
I need to think....
Why now? Why here?
Out of nowhere…you appear
Oh, but....I want you
I sneak another peak
As my mind brings to my eyes the memories
It seems just yesterday
you looked at me that way
     ….when you undressed me
     ….when you caressed me
     ….when you made me understand
how a body can speak
the language of love
Never before
Never since....
has my body spoken
with the same eloquence
That language I first learned with you
I want you
But....the pain won't go away
you were too proud to say
I'm sorry
Oh....but my lips are getting moist
hungering for your kiss
I look your way
And…nothing matters but those eyes
My heart will give me away
Thundering in joy
It won’t be still!
    ….. Let me think
    ….. Let me think
Oh...Oh...but....I want you
Here you are….
You’ve made it over to me
Here you stand
Looking down at me…
Reaching for me….
Oh…

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Taking you into my arms – lifting 
Your eyes -- dark pools of honey
Your lips – full . . . moist . . . inviting 
Our bodies embrace – I am home
My prayers for another chance – answered by your kiss
Our words tumble over each other
Tears, laughter, kisses . . . relief
My beautiful darling – I’ve missed you
    …. Your smile
    …. your touch
    …. the way you look at me
Making love until the dawn
Our bodies intertwined 
My head resting upon your breasts
Listing to the rhythm of your heart – my heart
How beautiful you are my darling – 
Your love is fragrant and radiant
Filling my heart with light  . . . 
Look – I am glowing from within . . . 
But…wait…what’s this?
I feel a stiffness creeping into your body
WHAT –  fear seizes me – I can’t breath
My darling – abandon the hurt, the pain I have caused . .
I am on my knees begging 
   your forgiveness
   your love
How can I prove my love – 
   earn your trust?
I won’t leave – never again!
I love you
need you
you
you . . . 

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What if you hurt me again?
This time....I won't recover
This time….I won’t survive
It has taken so long
for this heart to mend
Down on your knees
Your eyes plead
I see the tears gather
Can I risk it?
Can I?
But then again
Can I risk going back to the emptiness
that you left behind
A life without you
was days and nights
of longing...for you
My fingers reach
For those unruly strands of hair
You turn your face into my palm
Planting a kiss
Your arms go around my waist
as you rest your head against my body
We're lost to the world
Our moment
Our truth
You're finally home
I bend down to whisper
"Stand up and walk me home
There is language….I want to hear
I want to hear your body speak to me.”

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And that night
In our hungry bed
The eloquence of our shared language
The body syllables of desire
The sound units of passion
The language of our love
Was heard by the world
 
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The story of a chance encounter between two old lovers
*********** Love lost and love found **************
A Collaboration by Eileen Manassian and David Meade

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Phatt Matt September 6, 2015 at 3:53 PM HI DAVID AND EILEEN THIS A MASTERPIECE !! PHATT MATT

Eileen Manassian April 9, 2015 at 1:17 PM Hey you...I've come looking at you again! ;) I need you to write, David. Write. Listen, meanwhile...there is a mistake in my part...stanza before the last...Your arms go around my waist...as you REST...not RESTS...also, that last line of that stanza...I want to hear your BODY speak to me. ;) Fix that, dear, if you don't mind. HUGS David Meade April 9, 2015 at 2:58 PM Done!! I have three or four poems banging around in my head -- just need to sit down and write them out. Also, was just asked to write a commemorative poem for a lady who is retiring after 40 years of teaching and working in the christian school! These are always fun to write. Hugs back to you LO.

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2015 at 11:01 PM yep, I did, don't know where else to look. I think I have seen all your poetry!!

Eileen Manassian March 14, 2015 at 10:24 PM Hey, partner...dropping by to say hello. Also...to let you know I soupmailed you. It's been a while. Hope all is fine. Jade (Eileen) ;) Eileen Manassian March 18, 2015 at 2:05 PM All I have to say here, my dear is this......... XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO David Meade March 18, 2015 at 2:01 PM Hey you! I read your post about leaving the soup! Please don't!! I have felt that way often but I think it's important that we stay. You have powerful words that need to be posted and shared . . . yes, some may fuss -- but let their words fall flat. Write my LO, be strong and courageous . . . of course I am praying for you -- each and every day! Hugs Warrior Princess!!

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2015 at 11:48 PM Came here to tell you why I used name Sammy in my spring limerick. i was looking for an S name like Spring. And thought of my nephew Sammy. But unlike my limerick Sammy, my nephew is young and not married. Maybe in time he will be able to perform like the birds and bees!!

Kp Nunez March 2, 2015 at 11:49 PM Came by to read again this collab, David. The first time I read it, I didn't get to finish. The plot touched a familiar chord, can't read without that constriction coming up my throat...Finally was able to finish now. I'm glad it's a happy ending. Not all are blessed with that joyful victory your lovers had. A rousing 7 and to the favs! I just love you and Eileen! David Meade March 3, 2015 at 8:44 AM Thank-you Kim, Forgiveness is sweet and powerful but as you mentioned not always assured in the real world. I have really enjoyed getting to know you -- you are a wonderful writer and I do look forward to reading you every chance I get. Much love and light dearest Kim.

Meg Anderson February 24, 2015 at 1:20 PM Oh my! love it!!!!! sweet!

Eileen Manassian February 19, 2015 at 6:08 PM :) Eileen Manassian February 24, 2015 at 12:52 PM HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! David, do be serious. I saw that my looking didn't hinder you none! ;) Hugs David Meade February 19, 2015 at 7:06 PM I see you looking at me!! I am trying to write . . . can't play right now . . .

Monterey Sirak February 10, 2015 at 8:05 AM Fantastic collaboration! "Never since has my body spoken with the same eloquence" That one line sums up the depth of passion and love that were lost. David Meade February 10, 2015 at 8:47 AM Ah, thank you Monterey -- you are most kind. The line you quoted is my favorite -- it was penned by sweet Eileen -- it is full of grace and still fills my heart with peace and love. Thank-you for stopping by -- much love and light.

Shane Cooper February 10, 2015 at 3:13 AM This is a terrific write a blend of rememberance and the joy of love found in reunion. It is worthy of both of my favourite artists. Into favs it goes. Thank you David and thanks to my enchantress as well you make a wonderful team. Love Shane David Meade February 10, 2015 at 8:52 AM Thank-you dear Shane -- you have selected your enchantress well . . . but beware, her love and powers are like the whirlwind -- mighty, strong, and wondrous . . . treat her much care and love -- her friendship is priceless . . . now, chase the wind, for love and adventure awaits you!

Eileen Manassian February 10, 2015 at 12:52 AM David...isn't it time you got out of bed???? ;) I know it's nice and comfy cozy there...but you need to do some writing as well. I'll let you go and get to it... Oh dear...I just had to tease you...Come on now....Waiting for something new from you, My Partner in CRIME!!! ;) Eileen Manassian February 10, 2015 at 9:37 AM My brownies are to DIE for! ;) David Meade February 10, 2015 at 9:00 AM Satiated -- I dream on . . . beginning to wake, a shower, some coffee, maybe even a thick chocolate brownie -- hummm! Your encouragement (a kick in the pants) is always lovely!! Hugs dear Little One!!

Andrea Dietrich February 9, 2015 at 6:59 PM David, just came to say hi. I am on borrowed time this week and don't have time to find a poem of yours I 've not seen. Maybe one does not exist until you post a new one. Anyway, thanks for reading my stuff!! Luv,Andrea

Constance La France February 8, 2015 at 2:31 PM David, what an incredible passionate write, you both captured this romantic encounter brilliantly, it was a powerful journey, well done and thanks for the visit ~~

Liam Mcdaid February 8, 2015 at 3:47 AM powerful collaboration you two a pleasure in reading your pens came together beautifully dear friends wishing you both a blessed beautiful sunday

Paul Callus February 7, 2015 at 8:51 AM Great collaboration, Eileen & David!!! This is a deeply expressive encounter between two lovers....my presence here makes me feel like I'm an intruder...but could not help reading through to the end. Well done! David you make a perfect collaborator where passion is concerned:) // paul ps this same comment I also posted on Eileen's...only fair it goes on both! Paul Callus February 7, 2015 at 2:11 PM Thank you David:) Both you and Eileen are kind and honest...true friends in my book! David Meade February 7, 2015 at 12:00 PM You know first hand the delight and blessing it is to work with Eileen -- she is a true professional, a word lover. Though I am past my prime in the passionate love making, it was delightful for me to think back to those days of bliss. Your friendship is priceless -- I don't know who thinks of you more highly -- me or Eileen, but we both agree you are wonderful.

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 7:55 AM Dropping by to give you a well deserved 7 my friend. After reading this one again I have a sudden urge to light up a cigarette, and I don't even smoke *lol*. David Meade February 7, 2015 at 11:54 AM I needed oxygen several times during this writing . . . I am old but it was fun to plumb the depths of passion . . . even if it was only in my imagination. Thank-you for your continued support . . . you are a faithful friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis February 7, 2015 at 7:28 AM An Odyssey of love culminating in an unparalleled romantic union and consequent bliss! Congratulations to both of you my dear poets whom I have come to love and respect for the integrity of your character and your unsurpassed eloquence! A seven to you Eileen and another seven to you David! May the Good Lord keep you under His protection! David Meade February 7, 2015 at 11:52 AM As we were writing this piece . . . we came to the moment where I was asking for forgiveness not knowing her response I waited as a lover would . . . and when she forgave me, my life exploded and love reignited . . . such is the gift of forgiveness that sweetens the love we receive . . . you my friend, know of these wonderful gifts. Eileen is a blessing in my life -- a wonderful friend who has deep faith. Much love.

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2015 at 10:20 PM my goodness, what a passionate sizzler!! you two outdid yourselves with this one. I'm with Mystic Rose. A sucker for the happy ending you provided us. David Meade February 7, 2015 at 11:46 AM I was out of breath most of the wave -- Eileen is a dynamo full of love, life and passion. Thank-you for your kind visit, much love and light dear Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 6, 2015 at 11:56 AM - David, I read this at Eileen yesterday ..... I love this co- write between you - I gave Eileen a powerful 7 .... and I will give it to you too !!! - ... Hot .... well done !!! - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) David Meade February 6, 2015 at 12:00 PM Thank-you Anne Lise -- you are most kind -- this means a lot coming from one who is filled with passion, love and forgiveness! We wish you much love . . . always.

Eve Roper February 6, 2015 at 9:04 AM A beautiful write, David & Eileen, a 7. Blessings xoxox to both of you Eve David Meade February 6, 2015 at 11:47 AM Ah, dear Eve, you are most gracious and I agree with you that Eileen is wonderful . . . love and forgiveness -- you can't have one without the other -- our hope is that we all may experience incredible love that comes from forgiveness and a second chance! Much love Eve and may your canvasses all be filled with color!! Eve Roper February 6, 2015 at 10:07 AM :) you and him or two wonderful persons Eileen Manassian February 6, 2015 at 9:51 AM I don't know where David has run off to, so I will thank you on his behalf, Eve. Thanks ever so much for reading this write. hugs

Eileen Manassian February 6, 2015 at 1:12 AM David...you are WAY too good to me. I don't know how to react to that lovely intro. You know you are very dear to me. :) I'm glad it took us time to write the collab. Got to know you better. THAT was invaluable. HUGS!!! Thanks for letting me post FIRST! ;) David Meade February 6, 2015 at 12:07 PM OK, caught up now – you are such a hard task master – I love it! I like it when you fume . . . you do it so well:)) Your tormentor need to make a living – back to the grind stone! Don’t you have papers to grade? Much love Little One Eileen Manassian February 6, 2015 at 9:54 AM WHY...THANK YOU>>>DLO>>>>for the visit. I'm sorry I'm not here to take your post, but I will get back to you as soon as I can. YOU SILLY BOY! People need to be affirmed here. Get your act together!!! FUME FUME!