I See You

"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you . . ."

                                                            A Rambling Poet

I see you…

Scarred and renewed
Passion in a picture
Emotion in a painting
Tears in words on paper
Pain in the strums of a guitar
Dreams waiting to be fulfilled
Strength to overcome
Tenderness beneath the ice
Wanting what you never had
Glimmer of hope to be healed
Faith in the unseen
Fear in the unknown
Trust in something new
Mask for others to see
A smile that should never be hid
Eyes that are both beautiful and sad
Laughter that is music to my ears
Ability to always make someone smile
Go out of your way to make someone happy
Humorous in your own way
Intelligence that continues to impress me
A love for getting lost in a book
Kindness that is rare to find and so lucky to receive
Open minded to life
Seeking adventure at any opportunity
Willingness to do anything for fun
Understanding like no other
Patient in all the right ways
A wall of protection built by years of suffering
Hope of one day not feeling anymore pain
Yearning to be whole, complete
Desire to feel true happiness
Confident on the outside
Battling with insecurities on the inside
I see you…
Broken
Healing
Beautiful
A phoenix rising out of the ashes


By: Shauna Riley

For Constance's contest, "Writing in the Sublime"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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La France Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations Shauna on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, sublime and divine~~
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Writing in the Sublime" contest A. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:13 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Shauna
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:31 AM
impressive! … KUDOS to you for superb win,shauna..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Congrats Shauna on your exciting win in the contest with this beautiful entry luv.. amazing ..luv..
George   Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:46 PM
Sublimely beautiful, Shauna. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Righting Riley - Shauna Riley Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Miss P.D. - broken and beautiful...someone once told me...all the pain mixed with happiness, makes for a beauty in life that most people could never have.
A   Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 8:02 AM
wow! Rambling Riley,, atm I feel broken,, I love this poem,, i love the ending.. I will keep that in mind... Adding this to my favorites,,,miss..p.d.
Maverick Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 7:42 AM
well put, Rambleing righting riley.
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