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I SEE YOU

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a silence, thick as August heat, parts when the bus driver waits for the limping man to reach his seat. the child weeping in the pharmacy aisle is not yours, but you crouch anyway, offer a tissue, a name, a glance that says I see you.
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Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 7:06 PM
Sweet ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:25 PM
thank you :-)
Hind Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:44 PM
This is delicate but powerful. I love this theme.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:26 PM
glad you like the theme...it's one of my favorites
George Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Yes, the feeling of relief one can offer to those in distress may be through a simple act of kindness. What such acts declare loudly is- "I see you." Dear Sara, through a small poem, what a beautiful message you have conveyed!
Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 8:19 PM
This is a 'different sort of' --- Wonderful, Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:26 PM
awww, thank you kind sir!
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 5:29 PM
Ahh!! Such sad eyes on the pup. I like this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:27 PM
glad you enjoyed the poem, Sara K. appreciate your visit, hugs and blessings, SAra
Swan Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 1:28 PM
To be seen and heard is to be loved.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:25 PM
I agree, Jeanette. Merry Christmas
Parker Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 7:54 AM
If only the world were like this, not just patches of kindness but a whole cloth
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:26 PM
Oh, that would be great! thanks for your comments.
Jones Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Awwww this is a sweet one
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:26 PM
many thanks, Karen.
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