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I See My Body

i ask all hearts why? love to make all eyes with tears it says me helpless i ask all soul why? feel pain for pain of others says they related now i ask me why? cry in between heart and soul i see my body

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2016 10:42:00 AM

Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful...

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/5/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by on my poem, loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2016 3:37:00 PM

an interesting triplet, BL. It is a very feeling set.

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2016 12:39:00 PM

- A sensitive heart and a good soul, dear Bl - Great written - I wish you a lovely weekend in peace and harmony with your body - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 2/27/2016 8:04:00 AM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend, bl