I See Beyond

The old woman was crooked and bent;
she moved with care and sorrow.
Her face showed all the years of toil
with little hope for tomorrow.

Yet I see beyond her shuffling walk
to the light left in her eyes.
For many years she's graced this earth;
she's interesting and wise.

I see the girl that she once was
not just her mile long stare.
I see beyond her wrinkled face;
her head of pale white hair.

I see one who has been well loved
and lived through heartbreak too.
Could learn alot from her I know
before her day is through.

So let me clasp her hand in mine
and listen to her story.
Perhaps we'll share a cup of tea
before her march to glory.



for contest"I See Beyond"
sponsored by Paula Swanson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Smith Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 7:37 PM
I'm curious, is this about your mother. This is a very touching piece.
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:18 PM
WONDERFUL. this is what I was going for with my own entry until I decided to make it about God. I really really like your poem! Congratulations on your win.
Gorelick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:57 PM
OUtstanding work...nice rhymes that are not forced..beautiful..congrats. BG
Stanley Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Wow... very touching, Deb, just filled with so much emotion. Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Reminds me of me with the being bent..Congrats..Sara
Lanford Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 9:46 AM
Deb, I love this poem. It's wonderfully written and touches my heart.
Song Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:35 AM
Hi Deb-The 2nd stanza is my favorite part...you show YOUR true humanity by being able to look past her gray and write "she is interesting and wise." The closing lines are superb also. Congrats on this 2nd place win. It shines. Happy New Year, Gwendolen
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 5:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I See Beyond" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 10:43 PM
A very touching and loving poem Deb. I wish everyone would stop long enough to really see our elders. Congratulations on this fine write
Johnson Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Well done and a great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Williams Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 4:10 PM
Deb congrats on your win, excellent..David
Castro Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 3:24 AM
7up
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December 23, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Another very good write.Enjoyed reading it.
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