I Scream Moment

with sight for sore eyes an aromatic sunset- stop by and try one Inspired by Raul' latest photo

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Sue Mason

Date: 4/25/2010 4:23:00 PM

LOL play on our fast foods here, Brian !! Good luck in Raul's contest !! Your MLK write is just BRILLANT !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2010 2:18:00 PM

excellent write sounds interesting to me, enjoyed,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2010 1:38:00 PM

Sunsets like this are truly a blessing from heaven. Enjoyed your haiku, Brian. Best wishes in the contest. Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 8:52:00 AM

SOUP MAIL...luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2010 8:14:00 AM

Luv your original and unique concept Brian and should do very well in the contest.. good luck with this endeavor.. luv.. "Sweetheart" .. great blog today too..

Kim M

Date: 4/25/2010 5:07:00 AM

I love this title! Also, the sweetness of the images in the first two lines and the invitation to share one with you, really broadened my smile! Very creative haiku.

Mitch White

Date: 4/25/2010 3:04:00 AM

You are in the moment- nice one

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/25/2010 2:59:00 AM

Excellent Haiku..................... A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit