I Saw You Hanging

Jesus, I saw you hanging there alone
Like truth that needs neither props nor supports
Deserted by your studiously chosen apostles and
Disowned by Peter, James and his brother, the approved inner circle

Jesus, I saw you hanging on the cross
Like a slaughtered goat for public sale
Condemned by the elders who induced the masses to ‘crucify’
Convicted by Annas and Caiphas the diligent chief priests!

Jesus, I saw you hanging at Golgotha, the place of sculls
Like a criminal with no legal practitioners to defend
Beaten with cruel hands, legs and whips
Belittled with filthy motions, petitions and abuses

Jesus, I saw you hanging outside the gate with your cassock missing
Like an un-ordained ordinary layman
Accused by both religious and secular powers that wish to stand apart
Avenged by Herod, the foxy culprit, and Pilate, the cautiously benevolent

Jesus, I saw the truth hanging there alone
With neither props nor supports to ease her suffering
Jesus, I saw truth hanging on the cross
Forsaken by both the elites and the masses
When truth didn’t profit them

Jesus, I saw truth hanging at Golgotha,
The meeting place for sacred and secular
Abandoned by ministers of Church and State
While truth disturbed the status quo

Jesus, I saw truth hanging outside the gate
Humiliated and defeated, ready for burial
Because truth refused to compromise
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:18:00 PM
I love this dear Henry, theres a lot of kindred souls in our Soup, bless them! Lent is the time when we remember the Sacrificial Lamb, hanging out there, still. Keep writing. Alofas, Tiaua.
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Henry Victor
Date: 3/19/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thank you Tiaua for your encouraging words. I will write by that GRACE that sustain us.
Date: 3/19/2014 4:14:00 AM
Henry the church crucified there own saviour keep sharing and Godbless.
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Date: 3/19/2014 8:40:00 AM
And continues to.crucify Leon. Thanks for reading. There are small pockets in the church - like you and I, and many more - that have not lost the sanity. This is not to say someone is better than the other. Humans are all frail! God bless you too Leon. Good to discover a kindred spirit here.
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