I Saw the Red Kites! (Rare Birds of Prey)

I saw the Red Kites 
flying high in the sky; 
What a beautiful site to behold:
As they hovered above 
with the sun shining through, 
revealing their red, brown and gold. 

History tells 
about a century ago, 
these birds were almost extinct. 
I swear I saw one 
as it came sweeping down, 
give me a mischievous wink. 

"We're back (was the message) 
and we're here to stay, 
sit back and enjoy the view." 
Then all of a sudden 
they burst out in song, 
like a choir right on cue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 11:26 AM
I love this one. It is exceptional experience to something in nature that one has not seen before or not for a long time. Keep writing. Sara
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August 29, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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August 29, 2009 at 8:11 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Robert! Adeleke
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August 28, 2009 at 5:09 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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August 27, 2009 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations on being featured ... I really enjoyed this poem very much
Kurth Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Delightful poem! A few weeks ago, I saw an eagle fly by and it was exciting. Your poem brings that excitement back to me. Great job. Krista
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August 24, 2009 at 1:03 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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August 24, 2009 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robert. Love, Carol
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June 11, 2009 at 4:39 AM
Such imagery.What a great show!:)
Devonshire Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 2:45 AM
Although I have never seen a photo of a Red Kite, but your poems makes me feel like I have. Great work, Robert!
Winter Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Wow. Such wonderful poetry. The imagery superb and the writing like magic. Nature is so inspiring. Love, Shar
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March 26, 2009 at 4:48 AM
i thought it was kites... the play thing! but your write about the extinct birds... really cute!! nice writing... ~ Arany
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