Robert Lindley Poet Rhyme

I Saw the Great and Mighty Wave

I Saw The Great And Mighty Wave


I saw the great and mighty wave
As it came,
The emerald glistening of its heart,
A chasing spasm under blue-lit sky
Dawn's glow gave a twinkling start
And in the mist doubt flew right on by!

I saw the great and mighty wave
As it came,
The revealing of a newborn fawn,
A mystery in Nature's golden sphere
O' what glory rises in each new dawn
And we mortals walk blinded in our fears!

I saw the great and mighty wave
As it came,
The power of this world's dark abyss,
A dream that withers on the vine
Beauty in a rose, in a warm kiss
Sweet honey, love, love on which to dine!

I saw the great and mighty wave
As it came,
The emerald glistening of its heart,
A chasing spasm under blue-lit sky
Dawn's glow gave a twinkling start
And in the mist doubt flew right on by!

Robert J. Lindley,
Rhyme, 
( From the Inside, Peering Out )

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M. L. Kiser May 30, 2022 at 3:19 PM This is what I like about your work, you see the depth of meaning in nature and bring out the feeling of the experience. Robert Lindley August 22, 2023 at 3:56 PM Thank you, my good friend. God bless you...

Panagiota Romios May 28, 2022 at 2:38 AM Belated Congratulations, Robert. A terrific write, I shout! Panagiota

Susan Ashley May 11, 2022 at 10:09 AM My dear friend, I’m elated to return with congratulations for POTD honors. I’m thrilled to see this beautiful poem being recognized in such a grand way, Robert. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Rob Carmack May 10, 2022 at 10:41 AM Excellent my friend. Glad this got the recognition it deserves.

Michael Tor May 9, 2022 at 4:01 PM Back to wish you Congratulations Robert...

Paula Goldsmith May 7, 2022 at 6:57 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. A powerful/wonderful write. Love It. Hope you are OK. Have a great/blessed day writing away....................

Sara Kendrick May 7, 2022 at 3:40 AM Very effective way to show God's earth in a spiritual way. I enjoyed reading this one today. Sara

Brandy Nicole May 6, 2022 at 6:15 PM "And in the mist, doubt flew right on by." This thought curls softly around me and my heart. The right outlook to have indeed. Beautiful in every way, my dear sweet friend. Your words are so uplifting. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Christine Watts May 6, 2022 at 3:02 PM Hi Rober Nicely written and has a lovely depth Well done on POTD Cheers Christine

David Kavanagh May 6, 2022 at 2:33 PM Ain’t this a poem and a half Robert, inspirational indeed, is about as much as I can say, I’m not qualified enough to use any more superlatives, congratulations on a powerful potd, cheers David

Mike Gentile May 6, 2022 at 1:44 PM Superb imagery Robert and a beautiful poem for POTD! Congratulations!!

Connie Marcum Wong May 6, 2022 at 12:43 PM This is very lovely Robert. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! Blessings xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta May 6, 2022 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your POTD! BEAUTIFUL! :)Paulette

Constance La France May 6, 2022 at 11:22 AM Robert, a beautiful write and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance

Joseph May May 6, 2022 at 8:41 AM "The glory of each dawn" and the beauty of nature, gives us hope for brighter tomorrows, Congrats on POTD Robert

Susan Lawrence May 6, 2022 at 6:33 AM Back with congratulations Robert ! I love this so much and am thrilled to see it as POTD !! Blessings to you my friend, Susan :)

Unseeking Seeker May 6, 2022 at 5:59 AM Superbo ~ congrats on POTD, Robert

L Milton Hankins May 6, 2022 at 5:39 AM Congratulations, Robert, on your P.O.T.D. So well-written and deserving!

Valsa George May 6, 2022 at 5:36 AM This is indeed such great poetry with striking and captivating images breaking out like mighty waves ! Rejoice on your well deserved honor, Robert.

Michael Tor May 6, 2022 at 5:12 AM Robert one of the best if not the best poetry I have read in a while my friend. It is deserving of a top 100 classification at the very top of the list. I pray and hope you are with peace. I am delighted to see this magnificent write this morning. It will be a favorite for me. I haven't been on the soup very much and by great chance I happen to see this wonderful write from you. God bless you my friend...

Bill Baker May 6, 2022 at 1:01 AM The repeat of the first verse to close this poem was powerful of a beautiful way to set to continuing thought in my memory. A brilliant and eloquently written verse, Robert. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry with us. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Enjoy your day my friend, Bill Straight to my favorites list. :-)

Bj Legros Kelley May 6, 2022 at 12:54 AM This is beautiful, "The emerald glistening of its heart, A chasing spasm under blue-lit sky Dawn's glow gave a twinkling start And in the mist doubt flew right on by!" Such great lines, awesome! Congratulations on POTD, a well deserved honor on this wonderful uplifting poem! ~BJ

Tom Cunningham May 6, 2022 at 12:32 AM Amazing poetry Robert, and deserving of the honour of POTD, congratulations. Tom

Susan Lawrence May 5, 2022 at 8:32 AM This is beautiful Robert in its intention , raw emotion and love . I love And in the midst doubt flew right on by ! Oh what a wonderful thought . The emerald glistening in its heart is amazing and inviting . Hugs and blessings, Susan :) Robert Lindley August 22, 2023 at 4:00 PM Thank you, my good friend. Aways appreciate your insightful comments. God bless you...

Susan Ashley May 5, 2022 at 5:52 AM My dear friend, I am enraptured by the beauty of your poem and deeply moved by its emotions. Your artistic and talented pen flows with effortlessly grace, vibrant imagery and captivating metaphor to create an exquisite and expressive gem. Your poet’s heart speaks and your soul shines! A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Robert Lindley August 22, 2023 at 3:58 PM Thank you, my good friend. Sometimes the urge to write hits and one flows right on out. God bless..

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