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I Sail Boat

As drops from the clouds cease, I stroll to meet a friend of mine a paper boat in hand, a local boy runs from the PDS shop queue, looks for water to sail his boat, tried in a small dirty puddle, embarrassed to see,the boat stay still! tried in the nearby ditch, already choked! Cursed heavens, a way out of embarrassment! Looked around little boy, my gaze, he dislikes! fellow doesn’t want others follow his passion! I started walking away poker faced, Fellow jumped with a smile believing I know not his embarrassment, got into his fantasy world to try another fun….

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Date: 1/15/2014 1:36:00 AM
Sometimes fantasy becomes reality.
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Date: 12/4/2013 3:59:00 PM
oh this is funny. It is exactly how people act when they know they have been seen failing like this. Good one.
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Date: 12/4/2013 7:14:00 AM
Morning friend, I thought I liked the new avatar but it's all blurry, wiser? ;) LOL, a year or 2 OLDER [me] see that message below mine TOTALLY disregard it the 'person' has been around for years DOING what ever the heck he/she thinks they are doing, the best course is no response at all! Light & Love
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Date: 12/3/2013 7:55:00 PM
Love your keen sense of observation here Jenish...This brings back fond memories as well...As youngsters we used to catch Salamanders and Newts, place them in a fallen maple leaf and give them a nice little boat ride...believe it or not, they seemed to enjoy it! - Tim
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Date: 12/4/2013 1:35:00 AM
Thats great Tim.Thanks for adding more value to my poem.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/2/2013 9:44:00 PM
This brings back my memories. As I child I used to Gomati River of my town Dwarika, Jenish
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:18:00 PM
Dr.Mehta, thank you. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/2/2013 1:06:00 PM
Great poem, Undertaker. A clear painting of a child's play. An observant poet. Thanks for sharing this childish story with me. JM
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:01:00 PM
Thank You. (: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/2/2013 11:44:00 AM
Wow nice story poem. Yor words followd d boy in a swell way. Enjoyd readin poet!
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Zaynub.(: ) Jenish.
Date: 12/2/2013 11:08:00 AM
- Can do lots with vivid imagination ..... nice poem P.U. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lisa. (: ) Jenish.

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